DetachedDreamer
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Good story but minus 2 stars for two reasons. 1. he stuck his finger in his *ss for a prank. unacceptable for any reason. minus 1 star. 2. Hes gay. evidence below. minus 1 star. . . . evidence: Please refer to the first reason. Very justified having to swallow such poor humor and trying to forget it ever happened without tainting the rest of the story.
you have to make a deal every time you use them or have to be an uchiha and put them under an illusion, no conditions needed for the other two, but you choose the snake ๐๐คฃ๐๐น๐๐คฃ๐๐น. you just want to sound cool. but thats just a st*pid answer.
spiked down = collapsed
just call it an AU, we all know a nerf when we see one.
lol a villian in Harry Potter? lol ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ
oh no wonder, you wrote that terrible fate story about the hyuga. Jesus i know this story sucks for sure now ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น ๐ ๐คฃ ๐ ๐น
hopefully he gets some revenge on the journalist or this will be a let down.
All I ask for is 1% originality. its hard writing something original at this point, I get that, but just 1 percent. this is like .0000001 original. this story follows every other mediocre fanfic on here with the same core plot points. they aren't good, Idk why people think it is. the drama in this story is so horrendous and unnatural that you just gag, maybe laugh, might be confused. idk. Mom basically just says "well guys its about that time for me to die, seeya!" then she bounces and his friend snaps. I can't even believe this a thing. honestly I couldn't finish, im hoping its all an illusion and he wakes up from this terribly constructed dream. and I say if you aren't going to change an event then shut the f*ck up about it, say its inevitable and move on. or change it, maybe there's consequences but crying about it then not being able to do a thing? thats just bad writing. the worst. another mediocre story and another failure. on to the next one.