DetachedDreamer

just found this gem a few days ago. worth the read. honestly never read a fantastic 4 fanfic so any attempt is refreshing and more so when its quality writing. I can only hope the updating speed finds its stride, scares me thinking its already dying out with sporadic updates in the last month.

this screams tiny d*ck energy

I like the story a lot and I like male MC but I can't stand the female MC. annoying, impatient, irrational, reckless, and overall just an eyesore. Any male who says they are attracted to this type of female lead is lying. While im hoping she changes and im still committed to seeing the story through, if nothing gets better im bouncing. so much complaining from her. its crazy. Like shut the f*ck up woman. no one likes you. terribly written character and the only real flaw of the story.

Jesus the girls suck. id rather put a bullet in my mouth than be with either.

lol idolized joker?so he's a freak. or just sad. either way sounds terrible.

hope it's not about the series? you mean like a different age? there aren't enough lord of the rings fanfics to start being picky about when and where, let's get a few that can just last. so calm down. so stupid when folk say stuff like this.

The story overall is just forced nonsense. the grammar is cool but but by chapter 3 you can tell exactly where the story is headed. he'll be catching all the rogue women or ones at odds with their ninja villages. The way he snags em isn't so unbelievable but the way he keeps em is. and Mikoto seemed like such an idiot. I wouldn't ever believe that was the mom of itachi. too much nonsense to make this story work for me. So ill pass, not braindead enough at the moment.

someone thinking like this moments after a massacre is probably a psychopath

ya thats definitely weird

so the MC doesn't answer mikoto and deflects just like you didn't respond to any of the criticism and deflected? Jesus christ let's hope the story isn't how this post describes it.