DrVooDoo

not childish. just stupid. but can be ignored.

each chapter is getting longer to publish. we can see the end. it was great while it lasted tho!

is this another story where everyone is suspicious of him because he helps and knows so much? if this continues itll ruin the story.

story is such a letdown.

Wanted to love this story but the MC is ridiculous. its stated he had a passed life but it only comes into play when he needs to remember who someone or something was. everywhere else he just acts like he was born in the void. absent of common sense or the ability to judge and evaluate correctly. Author tries and justifies it but it fails. he acts goofy in the least funny way possible. its actually kinda sad. everything else was honestly great but I couldnt get past that nonsense.

trying to lable everything as manipulation.... reframing words to give your side a more favorable appearance is life. in the last two decades Presidents have called everyone they dont like "terrorists." only one requirement needed. being disliked. so they use the word "terrorist" to make them seem worse than they are. I feel like your MCs perspective is similar and the one thats most manipulative out of anyone else in the story. hes trying to make us see stuff that aint there. lol then again the MC disregarded human decency to try and hit on an older woman whos partner was right there next to them, doesnt really sound like something a decent person would do. so maybe he's not rational lol

so is he trying to act like soldier boy or is he actually irritated? lol because im confused whyd he get annoyed so quick. it doesnt make sense.