DetachedDreamer

trash

a terrible translation this chapter

write an original story then. idiot. sheep talk on here. why pick a known world then avoid the main story. lol thats mental. avoiding the plot isn't being original. it's lazy. write a whole new story and world if you're already going to expand on a world that was never fleshed out at least not enough to establish a whole other plotline as strong as the originals. makes no sense. if you're going to say F potter then do it completely. not this emo I'm a side quester because weirdos like you hate life and the golden trio but still want to in the same world as them? why? lol like i said sheep. shut up.

Its Gross the Main character loves causing pain to women sexually. The author is obviously a virgin who's never experienced a woman. He knows nothing of sex or how to please a woman. or himself if im to be honestly. idk what kinda man gets off on that. a F*cked up one maybe or just someone so clueless about it all. it is worrying thats your take on it tho. id get that checked out. disturbing. If you let someone close to you read this maybe they'd be able to help. Get help before you try and hurt some poor girl in the future. Other than that the story its self isn't bad but it has its problems.

bet you won't post your broke ass gf, if you can get one.

lol yall read stories just for this? small penis, virgin alert! all yall probably look like scrubs too, thats hilarious yall even got an opinion on the matter. broke ass bums! she could look trash but still better than the animals yall simp over.

male to female? good luck finding that tiny demographic your story will appeal to. if only someone made this story without the gross sex change.