DrVooDoo

reads like a terrible translation

There are entertaining elements to the story but you first have to shut off your brain to accept the premise and scenario presented to you. hes basically a fake person living in a fake location somehow publishing a story magically and skipping the whole process of creating and selling a book. said book being only published in? volumes? so tiny books, hes publishing tiny books. you can call them volumes if you want but they are what they are. its done so we can enjoy the reactions from muggles and wizards and focus less on the progression of any actual plot. I mean the whole thing is a buncha crazy. but its pretty easy to turn off your brain to reality these days so I also see the entertainment of watching how a world unfolds to such meta knowledge. the instinctual fear of knowing you've been watched at every moment by an unseen eye without your knowledge and all the terrifying questions that'll lead to is one of the fun parts of this story. but overall the MC hasnt done anything. what's his part other than writing?

being OP shouldnt stop growth. whether it be the MC, the world hes in, or the plot. there needs to be development somewhere. so saying hes overpowered in the synopsis doesnt justify a shitty story. lol you gave a full 5 stars? not one thing wrong? youre either lying or stupid. pointing out other reviews when you didnt a good review either. wake up. lol

and there it is. a whole restructuring to fit him into slytherin. weird but at least it explains why. lol every fanfic nowaday seems to want their MC to be in slytherin so bad they just reshape the whole story to fit it. its allowed but idk what the fascination is. lol

lol so he wants to join slytherin because he feels that it represents him? what benefits does he get for choosing slytherin or did he make up his own representation of what a slytherin is just to justify joining them? because in every actual realistic measure, joining them should be his last choice. the only way to make this real is if you just create a bunch of OC slytherins with the same mindset because no one actually living from Canon comes to mind. Ill just try and ignore this plothole. he wants to live in the dungeon, under Snape, and most likely with the suspicion of dumbledore once he become a slytherin thats highly skilled and also an irregular early enroller. lol that good Ole ambitious snakey mind of his at work 😆 🤣

ohhhhh snap

I do like Outkast out of those listed. Zero Horizon in 2nd.

It'd be nice to weaponize their songs against corrupt people. they dont gotta point out the targets physically. they just play songs with music videos relating to the subject matter. No need to really be politically aggressive but more revenge for the little guy. if that happened. naming the band something that shows they are on a missionbut I guess song names and album names could also cover that. maybe pointing out the complexity of the band. abbreviations for phrases like "Unity through diversity," breaking it down into letters, U.T.D. kinda idea, and diverse not just with race or religion but where they come from or the music that expands all genres and not just one type. I really didnt give any actual suggestions but hopefully I expanded one or two of yalls creative library mindscape your pulling from for ideas.