The Archon of Danmachi

Starts off pretty good and even follows a different route then most Danmachi fanfics which is better. But then it starts getting cringey with all the flirting. It wouldn't of been that bad but he was suppose to been 16 in his past life and is now 13. He had even gotten mistaken for a pallum, so its hard to see him as anything other then simply a child.

This story is good at the start, But more it progresses the it becomes horrible, And just because the stories ratin is 4.8 doesn't mean it was earned by how the good the story was, Many five star ratings were spammed to make this story have an easy attracting naive readers thinking this would be good.

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REVIEW RATING IS FALSE THIS STORY HAS SPAM 5 STAR REVIEWS THIS IS MORE LIKE A 2-3 STAR NOVEL. Very major red flags at the beginning of the story. Mc Is described to have sociopathic tendencies, his start in the world is quite frankly banal. Mc gets tons of starting loot that is seemingly in perfect condition despite the place he got it from being having been massacred of all its inhabitants except the mc. The mc then proceeds to shrug off 13 years of whats technically HIS new life and the tragedy that comes along with it because he a “borderline sociopath” as described by the author. If you can shrug that off, I hope you look forward to having our 13 year old mc flirting with women despite him being a child. Overall just disappointed in this novel and hope it improves/gets a rewrite in the future.

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It seems that some random dude posted 90% of the reviews and the story really sucks after a few chapters.

Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.

its good from the start but the more you read through chapter the worst it gets and also this book is spammed 5 star review by the same guy over and over again

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This story is not enjoyable at all and I sometimes questions whether or not the author has a brain that can think or has ever even read DanMachi The MC is already one of the strongest people in Orario by like the 30th chapter and he is one of the best when it comes to magic, crafting, item creation, etc. All the characters he interacts with are girls and he legit flirts with all of them as a 13 year old kid. The characters other than the MC are so one-dimensional that its boring. There is no other POV in this story besides the MC so we don't see the reactions to his level up(1 month) or anything of the sort. Some characters like Ryuu and Hephaestus are so out of character when around the MC that it is honestly ridiculous. Also the story is just repeating itself. Wake up>train>Guild>Dungeon> Hostess Fertility> Status Check> Repeat. SO BORING. I don't recommend reading this unless you want to lose braincells and want to start disliking DanMachi

the book start off bad with the broken stats and him shrugging off the trauma, but it get so much worse with all the horrible betrayal of the characters. its so forces that it made me right a review for the first time in months to put it simply I regret touching this garbage.

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It was good at start. but later it becomes annoying because the flirting he should at 15 or 16 but he is now 13 and also the response of girls is too quick to digest and also a;ll he do train, flirt and dungeon diving. There are no fun moments.

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The MC lacks wisdom, self preservation, foresight and true intelligence till at least chapter 70. Who would fricking curse himself, without knowing what it brings to not further his growth, but to get some stackable boost? The extra pool of resources is nice, but he can craft these as items. It ruins the read when the MC is self harming by sheer stupidity. I don´t know if the writer enjoys the egdelord stuff, but WHY a vampire curse? It´s Danmachi. Leave the edgelord stuff out of it. For hte most part the story develops fine and the characters while shallow are "rightish" enough. But the MC is just so cringe enducingly stupid in his aproach to strengthen himself and problem solving, that it almost physically hurt me to read it. If you love stupid MCs and egdelord stuff go ahead, clean writng and regular updates get 5 stars, background 4, charcter design and story 3. That is my take at chapter 70 when I couldn´t go on, because I loathe the MC and his stupidity. (cannot say it too often)

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Cringe "God gives me wishes" story. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................