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I feel like the MC wasted about 90% of her start. The 10% from the cheat she used. The rest was just flushed down the drain. Noble background? Being an uncultured pig is easier. Haveing extensive reach from the Phenex house to build herself up in society? Nah just waste time. Making friends and allies in her own camp? Being a sacastic dick to everyone is fun. Pissing away her chances for what? Cheap jokes. Somewhat disappointing.

The talks between the MC and the "system" are getting increasingly annoying. It is not funny, wastes a lot of space for plot and just repeats all over again. Cutting that out would be preferred. Thanks for the chapter

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Revenge will leave you empty when you have nothing else in your life. The MC does have a life outside revenge, so of yourse he doesn´t feel empty. Thanks for the chapter.

Please don´t stop her from being a Hashira. Don´t let his ego do this.

Well she can "wipe out" the effects of clima change. Freeze the polar caps to higher the salt levels of the ocean, to battle global warming. Clean the air from greenhouse gases. Which her company could support by selling green technology. She could support the space devolopment. Easy to leave earth and colonize the solar system. At least let humans start in that direction.

Nice character development for Miles. While it is understandable for the observer why it came to it. It also leaves him not as a party to pity, even thou he was just a 13 - 14 yo kid. To murder the wasp godess is while not fine is understanable, Layla as a godess for good, which can revive the dead, but doesn´t do it lightly and had well reasoned her rejection. Miles at the crossroad for hero and self-aggrandizing hypocryte went the latter.

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