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Akabane
AkabaneLv63yr
2021-04-28 13:02

Starts off pretty good and even follows a different route then most Danmachi fanfics which is better. But then it starts getting cringey with all the flirting. It wouldn't of been that bad but he was suppose to been 16 in his past life and is now 13. He had even gotten mistaken for a pallum, so its hard to see him as anything other then simply a child.

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Cory_Travis
Cory_TravisLv14

That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.

Craze_Novel
Craze_NovelLv11

I'm offend​ed short so what do you have problem wth that!

Julian_Zoldyck
Julian_ZoldyckLv1

Te mamaste 😂

Demonata_what_if
Demonata_what_ifLv1

I think the issue this guy has is that its a child not that hes short, hes only 13 afterall, and the guy wouldn't even have that much experience since he was 16 originally. I dont think its that dumb, hes just not comfortable with child romance

Cory_Travis:That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.
DRAG_on
DRAG_onLv1

I have read many novels where MC is 10-13 years old, in such cases I just imagine that he is 18 years old and continue reading. In most cases it helps.

TheAntiAkumar
TheAntiAkumarLv1

And being just short is fine, having to read about a 13 year old little boy flirt is not.

Cory_Travis:That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.
Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

You guys are so innocent... Getting uncomfortable ust seeing a 13 year old flirt... May God protect your innocence

Akabane
AkabaneLv6

Its not about innocence its about the cringe factor and its off the charts here

Emmanuel_Capricorn:You guys are so innocent... Getting uncomfortable ust seeing a 13 year old flirt... May God protect your innocence
Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]

Akabane:Its not about innocence its about the cringe factor and its off the charts here
shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

how envious😭😭

Emmanuel_Capricorn:then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]
Mortifer
MortiferLv14

13-ish is normal though. Even i had my first girlfriend when I was 12. And I'm the weird Otaku dude in class because liking anime was weird at the time.

TheAntiAkumar:And being just short is fine, having to read about a 13 year old little boy flirt is not.
LawGamer129
LawGamer129Lv4

Lucky you... Mine's stuck at Lvl.69... and it's not increasing

Emmanuel_Capricorn:then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]
Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
BruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhLv4

They are like playing with a toddler

Craze_Novel:I'm offend​ed short so what do you have problem wth that!
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