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Akabane
AkabaneLv64yr
2021-04-28 13:02

Starts off pretty good and even follows a different route then most Danmachi fanfics which is better. But then it starts getting cringey with all the flirting. It wouldn't of been that bad but he was suppose to been 16 in his past life and is now 13. He had even gotten mistaken for a pallum, so its hard to see him as anything other then simply a child.

The Archon of Danmachi

lusoba
4.1
210 Chs

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Cory_Travis
Cory_TravisLv14

That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.

3yr
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Craze_Novel
Craze_NovelLv11

I'm offend​ed short so what do you have problem wth that!

3yr
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Julian_Zoldyck
Julian_ZoldyckLv1

Te mamaste 😂

3yr
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Demonata_what_if
Demonata_what_ifLv1

I think the issue this guy has is that its a child not that hes short, hes only 13 afterall, and the guy wouldn't even have that much experience since he was 16 originally. I dont think its that dumb, hes just not comfortable with child romance

Cory_Travis:That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.
3yr
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DRAG_on
DRAG_onLv1

I have read many novels where MC is 10-13 years old, in such cases I just imagine that he is 18 years old and continue reading. In most cases it helps.

3yr
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TheAntiAkumar
TheAntiAkumarLv1

And being just short is fine, having to read about a 13 year old little boy flirt is not.

Cory_Travis:That’s a pretty dumb reason 😂 but I get what you’re saying. Some people are just short though, genetics.
2yr
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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

You guys are so innocent... Getting uncomfortable ust seeing a 13 year old flirt... May God protect your innocence

2yr
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Akabane
AkabaneLv6

Its not about innocence its about the cringe factor and its off the charts here

Emmanuel_Capricorn:You guys are so innocent... Getting uncomfortable ust seeing a 13 year old flirt... May God protect your innocence
2yr
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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]

Akabane:Its not about innocence its about the cringe factor and its off the charts here
2yr
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shin_rae_miu
shin_rae_miuLv4

how envious😭😭

Emmanuel_Capricorn:then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]
2yr
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Mortifer
MortiferLv14

13-ish is normal though. Even i had my first girlfriend when I was 12. And I'm the weird Otaku dude in class because liking anime was weird at the time.

TheAntiAkumar:And being just short is fine, having to read about a 13 year old little boy flirt is not.
2yr
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LawGamer129
LawGamer129Lv4

Lucky you... Mine's stuck at Lvl.69... and it's not increasing

Emmanuel_Capricorn:then I can understand but no worries.. After using this app for so long and reading so many fanfics I have aquired.. [Cringe Immunity-LvL.Max]
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Bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
BruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhLv4

They are like playing with a toddler

Craze_Novel:I'm offend​ed short so what do you have problem wth that!
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Excavelier
ExcavelierLv3

This story is good at the start, But more it progresses the it becomes horrible, And just because the stories ratin is 4.8 doesn't mean it was earned by how the good the story was, Many five star ratings were spammed to make this story have an easy attracting naive readers thinking this would be good.

3yr

Dancemikacin
DancemikacinLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistcBAt6L
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Started good but just became cringe and worse as the story progressed. Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade

3yr
Fantasii
FantasiiLv13

REVIEW RATING IS FALSE THIS STORY HAS SPAM 5 STAR REVIEWS THIS IS MORE LIKE A 2-3 STAR NOVEL. Very major red flags at the beginning of the story. Mc Is described to have sociopathic tendencies, his start in the world is quite frankly banal. Mc gets tons of starting loot that is seemingly in perfect condition despite the place he got it from being having been massacred of all its inhabitants except the mc. The mc then proceeds to shrug off 13 years of whats technically HIS new life and the tragedy that comes along with it because he a “borderline sociopath” as described by the author. If you can shrug that off, I hope you look forward to having our 13 year old mc flirting with women despite him being a child. Overall just disappointed in this novel and hope it improves/gets a rewrite in the future.

3yr
UnnamedKing
UnnamedKingLv2

I will no longer torture myself reading this. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

3yr
MrIIIo
MrIIIoLv5

It seems that some random dude posted 90% of the reviews and the story really sucks after a few chapters.

3yr
Topanl4w
Topanl4wLv13

Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.

2yr
Aidoneus
AidoneusLv11

its good from the start but the more you read through chapter the worst it gets and also this book is spammed 5 star review by the same guy over and over again

3yr
ArthurCE10
ArthurCE10Lv4

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3yr
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