VoidReader8577

Maybe you can use the next chapter as an opportunity to introduce modern cuisine. Like Sebastian was complaining about the food in the beginning, so if he served some modern stuff it could lead to some interesting reactions

ok honestly while i really like this story, i feel like nothing has happened in the last few chapters. Like i get it, there was just a giant fight so everything needs to cool down. However its frustrating when there is so little that happens in a chapter.

wait he went to the harry potter world? When did that happen? Also i completely forgot he could travel to other worlds because how under utilized it is in this novel.

does the R18 really need to be multiple parts?

more chapters soon more frequently?

tyftc. Just a question author, is this concept something that you came up with? After this chapter I understand what you have been trying to convey, but is this inspired by another work? Or is this completely original?

I’m honestly scared for this story. I feel like this story is going to be very long and slow paced in order for the MC to gain recognition. The problem is, i feel like this story will be dropped just like all the other stories of this author. Given his track record it’s highly likely

tftc