Slothful_Player
If I'm very critical and nitpicking, just know that's because I see great potential in the idea's a story presents and don't want to see it ruined
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Slothful_Player3 hours agoCommentedFamous last words
- Slothful_Player3 hours agoCommented
Bro is so disappointed 😭
- Slothful_Player3 hours agoCommented
- Slothful_Player3 hours agoReplied to yagami_void
A real dragon with four legs, not these wyvern looking frauds, they call dragons
- Slothful_Player5 hours agoCommented
Missed the opportunity to have him look like the monarch of Destruction
- Slothful_Player5 hours agoCommented
Never, and I mean, never ever say that your character is smart because if you admit that, then readers will gain certain expectations about the character's intelligence.
- Slothful_Player5 hours agoCommented
"The Lion was just a savage pretending to be a noble Knight"
- Slothful_Player6 hours agoReplied to Average_Weebo
The Primarchs are smart. The problem is that they are more human than they believe, meaning that they can be influenced just like a normal human
- Slothful_Player6 hours agoCommented
The lion has done way crueller things
- Slothful_Player6 hours agoReplied to cabooseiscool_1
Half the fun of the Primarch is that each has a strength and a weakness, making them balanced. This makes the match ups more interesting