Starts off pretty good and even follows a different route then most Danmachi fanfics which is better. But then it starts getting cringey with all the flirting. It wouldn't of been that bad but he was suppose to been 16 in his past life and is now 13. He had even gotten mistaken for a pallum, so its hard to see him as anything other then simply a child.

This story is good at the start, But more it progresses the it becomes horrible, And just because the stories ratin is 4.8 doesn't mean it was earned by how the good the story was, Many five star ratings were spammed to make this story have an easy attracting naive readers thinking this would be good.

Started good but just became cringe and worse as the story progressed. Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade Subscribe to Technoblade

REVIEW RATING IS FALSE THIS STORY HAS SPAM 5 STAR REVIEWS THIS IS MORE LIKE A 2-3 STAR NOVEL. Very major red flags at the beginning of the story. Mc Is described to have sociopathic tendencies, his start in the world is quite frankly banal. Mc gets tons of starting loot that is seemingly in perfect condition despite the place he got it from being having been massacred of all its inhabitants except the mc. The mc then proceeds to shrug off 13 years of whats technically HIS new life and the tragedy that comes along with it because he a “borderline sociopath” as described by the author. If you can shrug that off, I hope you look forward to having our 13 year old mc flirting with women despite him being a child. Overall just disappointed in this novel and hope it improves/gets a rewrite in the future.

I will no longer torture myself reading this. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

It seems that some random dude posted 90% of the reviews and the story really sucks after a few chapters.

Scrolling down all they way to the bottom of the The review, i found so many 5 star spam. Sooo.. yeah, i don't like seeing that, since i'm a petty MF, i'll just put this review here. to balance things out, as they say.

its good from the start but the more you read through chapter the worst it gets and also this book is spammed 5 star review by the same guy over and over again

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