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My Multiverse Trip

Author: Ryan_Colman
Fantasy
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Synopsis

Reincarnation? Wishes? A System? Magic? Harem? Pudding? This story has all of those. Multiverse travel, kingdom building, fan boy dreams come true in this wild story starting in the Harry Potter world. Instantly op character? nope. sharingan at the start? nope. shameless Mc? yep. shameless comedy? yep. NTR. nope. Just to let everyone know this is my first story English is my native language I planned 0 chapters in this whole book and I literally started writing it because I simple wanted to read it myself. It contains parts from bringing the farm to another world, shadow hack, and supreme Anime system. leave any advice you want I read all comments and try to take them into account. (disclaimer I only own my characters I personally make) also there will be some grammar errors and some plot holes think of this as a rough draft I'm just winging it basically at this point lol doing well so far tho I plan to go back later to fix small things like speech and paragraphs sometimes I miss things. be gentle it's my first time.

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# ADVENTURE
# ROMANCE
# REINCARNATION
# SYSTEM
# R18
# COMEDY
# HAREM
# HARRYPOTTER
Chapter 1The end and the beginning.

Well let's start off with an introduction shall we? First my name is Ryan. 30 year old American guy. Average life none of those stupid overly powered things like millionaire playboy. Just a regular guy.

My hobbies include reading light novels and fanfictions. If I'm in the mood I'll look up some Manga. Then there's just those average days where you sit on YouTube and watch a billion videos on nonsensical things like those survival videos until your just bored and filled with stupid information you'll never ever use. Average stuff.

Today I'm going to tell you how I passed away.

Wait what?

Yeah I died.

I was reading at the library you know a nice quiet place and you know when they turn up the heat in the room and it's just the perfect temperature for you to lay your head down on your Harry Potter book and just pass out?

Yeah it happens in class too you just feel tired for no reason.

I woke to the sounds shouting and the roof being covered in a rolling flame. The shelves had gone up pretty fast and my vision was clouded by smoke.

I scrambled to my feet and started to rush toward the entrance. All around was basic chaos, the bookshelves where being knocked over and catching fire. Books don't make good fire stops people.

I noticed a small child about 9 crying for her mother, who had her leg trapped under a fallen bookshelf.

I rushed over to give her a hand. The woman grabbed onto my waist as I lifted the shelf up and pulled her leg out. I picked up the child and helped the mother as we started making our way to the exit.

Right as we were about to get out the roof groans. I look up and see flaming roof bits falling towards us and I know we aren't going to make it.

so I do what any self respecting hero would do. I drop the child.

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NOT!!!

I push the mother and daughter as hard as I can towards the exit while flaming hot debris falls on me.

I didn't die from the debris no I slowly roasted and let me tell you that's not a good way to go.

I screamed myself hoarse but after a bit I just couldn't go on and everything turned black and that's how I completed my ultimate form of jerked chicken BBQ style.

I woke up in a completely empty white space as far as the eye could see. The first thing I noticed was that I couldn't feel my legs hell I couldn't feel anything. I looked down at my body and noticed I didn't have a body. well shit.

"You are taking this quite well for being dead you know?" said a voice

"Who's there?!" I asked looking around confused.

I turn around only to see a gentle looking old man sitting across from me gazing at me kindly.

"hello there young man my name is $?&*#%$ but that's hard to pronounce for mortals you can call me God." said the now proclaimed God.

At about this point my minds going 100 miles an hour and I'm just staring at him. I mean I wasn't really religious in my life I believed there was a higher power though. But I didn't really go to church just figured you know if I didn't kill anyone I'd be fine and set to go to my happy spiritual place when I died.

"Ah well hello there I take it I died then?" I asked to confirm my situation.

"Yes you did. What was it you said? Right you achieved jerked chicken form. But quite the heroic way to do it I might say and fixed a mistake on my part." said God with a chuckle.

"Mistake?" I questioned.

"Oh yes even I make an ocasional blunder. You see that fire was caused by my accidentally releasing divine lightning and it would have killed that little girl and her mother. But thanks to you you've saved them and for that I'm going to give you a new chance to live and three wishes of anything you want." Replied god with a smile.

"Uh ok..quick question why did you accidently release divine lightning? That seems like a major thing to accidentally do." I asked

I notice gods cheeks light up slightly and he coughs out some words I can't make out sounding like cancelled Anime or something.

"*cough* let's not talk about that for now and get on to the real prize your next life." said God casually pushing the question under the rug.

"o...kay." I said giving him a suspicious look.

"Now you get 3 wishes, 2 for the lives you saved and 1 for your own life as compensation." he told me seriously.

"Sounds fair enough to me. can I ask some questions though?"

"Sure." he replied

"okay well first question what do you mean new life?" I asked.

"Well you can pick any time or place that you want to live and I'll send you there." he tells me.

"Nice. so is it reincarnation or transmigration? I read some light novels about that I enjoyed them." I asked excitedly

"Exactly and you get to pick which one you want." He said with a smile

Inwardly I'm screaming and shouting with joy. I'm about to blow up with excitement this is something great. Hundreds of world's are running though my head like Naruto or bleach maybe a cultivation world or dxd, ooooh. How about one piece?

But then all of a sudden my mind grinds to a halt and starts screaming at me dangerous, those world's are dangerous. I need a nooby world to begin with and I've got just the one.

Harry potter, I mean where else can I get the ability to teleport and a nifty room on the 7th floor filled with goodies plus magic I mean which child doesn't love magic? Well there's my first world choice out of the way.

"Alright second question will I retain my memories?" I ask seriously.

"Quite smart of you to ask hardly anyone does and yes you'll keep your memories. Wouldn't be much of a second life if you didn't."

"ah thank god for that." I sighed in relief

"Your welcome." God laughs.

Ah i forgot who I was talking too for a minute.

"My third question is will I have a body that's able to use all types of different magic based systems? Such as chakra or spiritual power or magic?" I asked. This is good to know or I'd have to stick to certain worlds.

"Of course, but you'll still have to train in those systems to be able to use them." he answers.

"That seems fair. So last question am I going to have to do something for you like fight some strange evil god that suddenly defeated you or save the universe from destruction?" I ask seriously. I don't like being tricked.

"No my boy. None of that your not some super being who lost his memories and has some hidden wife somewhere who needs saving." he laughs happily.

I'm sweating internally. That was a very specific statement, because that's just what I don't want man I just want to relax.

"Alright I'll trust you on this." I say. Even if it does happen we will deal with it.

"Okay now then if your done with all your questions let's get into your wishes okay?" he smiles happily.

"Alright well then for my first wish..."

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Blasphemer
BlasphemerLv5

The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it. Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right? Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh. Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too? Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.

5yr

Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Oh my god 98 chapters a week and rank 3 as of this moment I am a literal god lol the chapters I'm pushing out per day are just insane whoscompetin

5yr
Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Hey man I'm popping out over 10 chapters a day so far I think I'm doing pretty good for my first time writing a novel look at me now mom lol

5yr
IDaGoat_Mypark
IDaGoat_MyparkLv15

I'm sorry but I just can't read this.....he is such a coward. And don't even get me started on how basically everyone can read his fucking thoughts even though his a master of occumency. Like what the ****, It's not even funny anymore it's just plain stupid.

5yr
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 4/5 This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's good The one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34 I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic

5yr
Ammar_Monim
Ammar_MonimLv5

After 120+ chapters I can honestly say this is one of the worst mc's of all time the mc has 3 of the most overpowered systems ever but somehow this author managed to make them completely useless the mc is a weak pathetic idiot there is 0 character development and most of the chapters are useless filler.

4yr
Spike009
Spike009Lv4

This novel is Pathetic like seriously i am not even kidding . He has like 3 system how many 3. But still dumbass author make him weak and pathetic who sucks Harry potters dick. He says he doesn’t want to make Mc too op to keep story interesting . But when you read the novel you know author is just removing things from his ass. He has gamers mind but still dumbass Author forgets every-time he is scared , shaken, or can’t control his mood despite having Gamers mind. The very beginning chapter when he makes wishes you understand what kind of idiot Mc is . I tried reading it 2 time but cant its literally torture. To be honest this novel is **** . And author compromised the quality for quantity . I wish there were minus rating I would have given them . But sadly this is lowest rating I can give. You can see from the rating this novel is pathetic

4yr
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10

It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a troll And then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly

5yr
HellSingFang
HellSingFangLv13

Writing: no paragraphs, no spacing between dialog, just a big bunch of text. Stability: this man has no life outside Story: help everybody! Me? Oh I don't count. (mc) Character: I kept reading, hoping that the MC will get better... NOPE! Just a moron with a system, that remains a moron (telling everybody that he's reincarnated; tells everybody about his cheats; No protections against seers, prophets; Gamer's Mind is nonexistent even though he has it; three systems combined and he does not use them properly; and some more that I can't remember right now) World: It's a fanfic. The world is already there.

5yr
99prcntBookworm
99prcntBookwormLv5

I CANT READ SERIOUSLY BECAUSE SHIT WRITING STYLE AND THE MC IS IDIOT AND FOOL, YOU WANT TO BUILD A KINGDOM BUT HE'S WEAK! A KING MUST BE STRONG AND JACK OF ALL TRADES AND MASTER OF NONE AND WHAT THE USE OF SYSTEM? JUST LIKE TO SEE HIS STATUS? TSK AND GAMER MIND? HE PANIC ALL THE TIME WHEN CRISIS ARISES LIKE IN THE TROLL ARC TSK WEAK

5yr
danoof
danoofLv3

Usually, I like to read power fantasies but this is a weak mc disguised as an OP power fantasy mc. He literally has master grade occulmancy but literally EVERONE who is not dumbledore and snape and rando's can read his mind. Like WHY? 1/10

4yr
Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv13

Worst fanfic i read in a while :( The mc got 3 systems but barely use them,he got gamer mind but it doesn't work at all,11 years since he is reborn but barely trained, follow totally the canon story(30 chapters and the only thing different is saving the mother of luna...),don't use is brain at all(know all the major plot of the hp universe but don't prepare at all(troll)),i could keep going but the last thing i will write is it's the worst mc i ever read about(1000+ fanfic read). Iusually don't write review but i take the time to write this one to tell people to never start reading this *****. Don't lose your time, you can find a lot better to pass time, and don't listen to the author who tell you that only the 20 first chapter are like this , it's all the f***ing story ...

4yr
Kaiser0000
Kaiser0000Lv6

Reveal spoiler

5yr
ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5

Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10 Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10 Sad to hear that some **** novels got over 400+ chapters and good novel just like 10

4yr
Xavier_Kaito
Xavier_KaitoLv4

The story is interesting and has good potential at the beginning. The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good. But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing). Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis. Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying. Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days. Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.

5yr
Farmy
FarmyLv5

The Idea of bringing farm into another world system is really good. But when the MC start to going all friendly with canon MC and going gryffindork on sorting I stop reading. MC was like I dont want to be OP and stay low key but he was like I want to befriend harry and save people O.O btw he also share his secret including before rebirth.

5yr
ShenMeng
ShenMengLv5

Trash novel that’s written as the MC is a speaking to the reader and the MC is a retard. Its basically unreadable. Don’t know how it got to 400+ chapters.

4yr
Mandiiyy
MandiiyyLv13

Bro did you ever imagine if hulk thinks that by fighting in hilk form is too easy and so he starts fighting as Bruce banner. Your novel seems same bro you make mc op but when fighting he didn't even come in middle of the chart. He don't use his powers and don't use his weapons fights with hands and you say that there is no need an Excalibur for gobli. But you still use hands when fighting high level monsters and say that they can one hit ko mc. Are you really kidding me bbro...,............

4yr
Mauricio_Arroyo
Mauricio_ArroyoLv2

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Tanaiste
TanaisteLv4

This was terrible. I couldn't get past the first chapter, so utterly incoherent. I hate that I love these fanfics with reincarnation because they're all so badly written barring a few exceptions. It's awful.

4yr

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