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Mandiiyy
MandiiyyLv134yr
2020-06-19 01:10

Bro did you ever imagine if hulk thinks that by fighting in hilk form is too easy and so he starts fighting as Bruce banner. Your novel seems same bro you make mc op but when fighting he didn't even come in middle of the chart. He don't use his powers and don't use his weapons fights with hands and you say that there is no need an Excalibur for gobli. But you still use hands when fighting high level monsters and say that they can one hit ko mc. Are you really kidding me bbro...,............

My Multiverse Trip

Ryan_Colman
3.8
467 Chs

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Blasphemer
BlasphemerLv5

The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it. Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right? Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh. Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too? Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.

4yr

Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Oh my god 98 chapters a week and rank 3 as of this moment I am a literal god lol the chapters I'm pushing out per day are just insane whoscompetin

4yr
Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Hey man I'm popping out over 10 chapters a day so far I think I'm doing pretty good for my first time writing a novel look at me now mom lol

4yr
IDaGoat_Mypark
IDaGoat_MyparkLv15

I'm sorry but I just can't read this.....he is such a coward. And don't even get me started on how basically everyone can read his fucking thoughts even though his a master of occumency. Like what the ****, It's not even funny anymore it's just plain stupid.

4yr
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 4/5 This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's good The one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34 I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic

4yr
Ammar_Monim
Ammar_MonimLv5

After 120+ chapters I can honestly say this is one of the worst mc's of all time the mc has 3 of the most overpowered systems ever but somehow this author managed to make them completely useless the mc is a weak pathetic idiot there is 0 character development and most of the chapters are useless filler.

4yr
Spike009
Spike009Lv4

This novel is Pathetic like seriously i am not even kidding . He has like 3 system how many 3. But still dumbass author make him weak and pathetic who sucks Harry potters dick. He says he doesn’t want to make Mc too op to keep story interesting . But when you read the novel you know author is just removing things from his ass. He has gamers mind but still dumbass Author forgets every-time he is scared , shaken, or can’t control his mood despite having Gamers mind. The very beginning chapter when he makes wishes you understand what kind of idiot Mc is . I tried reading it 2 time but cant its literally torture. To be honest this novel is **** . And author compromised the quality for quantity . I wish there were minus rating I would have given them . But sadly this is lowest rating I can give. You can see from the rating this novel is pathetic

4yr
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10

It was so good for the first 10-20 chapters then you begin to realize the MC is a complete spineless coward that sits around lazing around talking about how he wants some good life with no worries but it doesn't happen because he continues the running into dangerous situation for every little f****** thing but he's too f****** lazy and stupid to buy anything to make him more powerful so he doesn't have to worry about getting his ass kicked by something as pitiful as a troll And then you go to the twilight world radio acts like a f****** guy version of Bella swan being afraid of every little f****** thing oh and don't get me started on the harem it was pretty good in the earlier chapters because you can still hear the names but now there's so many in his harem that is still devolved to him just saying "I'm going out on a date with the girls" instead of individually saying their names because there's like 20 girls already in his harem and he's only been to like five worlds Not to mention the cultivation world's when it's just the author talking down to his readers constantly

4yr
HellSingFang
HellSingFangLv13

Writing: no paragraphs, no spacing between dialog, just a big bunch of text. Stability: this man has no life outside Story: help everybody! Me? Oh I don't count. (mc) Character: I kept reading, hoping that the MC will get better... NOPE! Just a moron with a system, that remains a moron (telling everybody that he's reincarnated; tells everybody about his cheats; No protections against seers, prophets; Gamer's Mind is nonexistent even though he has it; three systems combined and he does not use them properly; and some more that I can't remember right now) World: It's a fanfic. The world is already there.

4yr
99prcntBibliophile
99prcntBibliophileLv5

I CANT READ SERIOUSLY BECAUSE SHIT WRITING STYLE AND THE MC IS IDIOT AND FOOL, YOU WANT TO BUILD A KINGDOM BUT HE'S WEAK! A KING MUST BE STRONG AND JACK OF ALL TRADES AND MASTER OF NONE AND WHAT THE USE OF SYSTEM? JUST LIKE TO SEE HIS STATUS? TSK AND GAMER MIND? HE PANIC ALL THE TIME WHEN CRISIS ARISES LIKE IN THE TROLL ARC TSK WEAK

4yr
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