Item: My Multiverse Trip
Rating: 1.6
Author: Ptitkactus

PtitkactusLv134yr

2020-05-17 05:45

Worst fanfic i read in a while :( The mc got 3 systems but barely use them,he got gamer mind but it doesn't work at all,11 years since he is reborn but barely trained, follow totally the canon story(30 chapters and the only thing different is saving the mother of luna...),don't use is brain at all(know all the major plot of the hp universe but don't prepare at all(troll)),i could keep going but the last thing i will write is it's the worst mc i ever read about(1000+ fanfic read). Iusually don't write review but i take the time to write this one to tell people to never start reading this *****. Don't lose your time, you can find a lot better to pass time, and don't listen to the author who tell you that only the 20 first chapter are like this , it's all the f***ing story ...

My Multiverse Trip

Ryan_Colman

3.9

467 Chs

Liked by 15 people

Replies2

Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Your literally 30 chapters in. There’s a lot I could say about this but I’ll just start off by saying your welcome to leave.

4yr

iwan_safwanLv15

Well 100ch in and still no gamers mind?

Ryan_Colman:Your literally 30 chapters in. There’s a lot I could say about this but I’ll just start off by saying your welcome to leave.

4yr

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