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Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor5yr
2020-01-30 00:36

Hey man I'm popping out over 10 chapters a day so far I think I'm doing pretty good for my first time writing a novel look at me now mom lol

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Daolord777
Daolord777Lv13

You rule dude , keep it up and have a nice day

Blackky
BlackkyLv14

Lol they read so much they became criticts hey he is just beginner writer i thinks he/she doing a good job so far

Ryan_Colman
Ryan_ColmanAuthor

Thank you lol I think I only have like 3 people who say bad thing about it the rest are all pretty good

Blackky:Lol they read so much they became criticts hey he is just beginner writer i thinks he/she doing a good job so far
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

So as long as you pop out a lot a chapters any book could get top 3 it doesn’t even have to be good

SuperCritic
SuperCriticLv4

Then write a exp book and become the top author of the year bro. I support you with all my heart

Demonzor:So as long as you pop out a lot a chapters any book could get top 3 it doesn’t even have to be good
Zeca
ZecaLv5

hey author does not care about the dick in the ass, that is so bad talking about his story she is good, fun and pleasant to read, so continue and don't give up please

Radium9
Radium9Lv11

Thanks

BugBug
BugBugLv4

did this work get dropped?

Soel_Eater
Soel_EaterLv4

Boss- are you okay now??? We our ready for your update 😊😊😊😊 If your not okay just relax for now 😊☺️😊😊

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Are you gonna update?

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Blasphemer
BlasphemerLv5

The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it. Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right? Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh. Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too? Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.

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