Although it begins in the best way and gives you hope in it, it ends up deseecting you as it progresses, it does not pay attention to the correct use of the powers of the protagonist (who even explains them and then forgets them) implies a plan for continue for the story that then goes through the eggs, the character does not evolve at any time, he is weak, fearful (he is terrified of heights, he is nervous, he is often ashamed, he shows too much his emotions, they can read his mind, etc; and that has the passive ability of the player's mind) and with delusions of greatness claiming to be a king when at the most and is a deku a little more serious. Prota's love affairs are good, Luna is a good wife for the protagonist, Tonks and Daphne. In short, it is a good story but you will be irritated by those errors as the plot progresses, especially if you read shadow hack and the farm before this story, personally I do not recommend it until I solve those minimal errors that give **** to this story that could be good among harry potter's isekai. In addition to the repeated paragraphs that all they do is confuse you.
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