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MHA:-Glitch In Reality

Author: Numix
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What would happen if Izuku tried to commit suicide after being bullied and neglected by the people he loved. But he didn't die, he awakened a quirk, a quirk so powerful that it wouldn't be wrong to say it is the strongest quirk ever. Now with a Cynical and Psychopathic personality, he is out for blood, and shake the very foundation of hero society. Stick around to find out what he does and how he does. This is my first time writing a fic, so I am open to constrictive criticism, and would love to know the areas where I can improve myself, while also would love to know what you like about my fic, so that i can work to improve it so that it becomes identity of my fics through which people can find out that these are my fics NOTE:- THIS IS AU... DON'T TRY TO COMPARE IT TO THE CANON...ANY CHARACTERS DIFFERENT FROM CANON ARE DONE BASED ON CREATIVE LIBERTY...AND I HAVE NO INTEREST IN TOLERATING ANYONE WHO WISHES TO COMPARE THEM TO CANON WARNING:- IT CONTAINS LOTS OF GORE, VIOLENCE, RAPE, AND ALL OTHER SORTS OF EXTREME DARK SHIT, SO READ IT AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION, AND THIS FIC IS A REALISTIC FIC AND WILL ALSO HIGHTLIGHT THE REALITY OF THE SOCIETY SO THIS FIC IS NOT FOR FAINT OF HEARTS. Support me through:- Paypal:- https://www.paypal.me/SVora02 Patreon:- https://patreon.com/EmperorNumix

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Volume 5 :Volume 5:- Canon Begins

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ELKO
ELKOLv3ELKO

Reveal spoiler

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.

BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv3BoredCrow

this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award

ArkonKnight
ArkonKnightLv3ArkonKnight

I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍

Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_CharlesLv4Adeniran_Charles

great concept, we're still really early on but it has lots of potential.the grammar could be improved, but it's not necessarily bad and you could do with better exposition and find a better way to get point across.

Mcho_
Mcho_Lv3Mcho_

only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario

Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3Kono_Timoda

Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Very interesting story, i like your writing and how plot is done, And i hope Yoyorozu Momowill join to his side. Momo in bikini pic for you as my thanks for the story.

jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14jackson_smith

Numix Great fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Mha fanfic idea immediately after MHA:-Glitch In Reality Mha : Oozaru A 19 year old boy dies in our world and is reborn into Mha as Izuku Midoriya with the blood of a Saiyan King in his veins. Harem Mitsuki Bakugo Inko Midoriya Yu Takeyama Nemuri Kayama Rei Todoroki Bulma Briefs Tights Briefs Panchy Chi-Chi Momo Yaoyorozu Videl Erasa Mina Ashido Fuyumi Todoroki Himiko Toga Shino Sōsaki Ryūko Tsuchikawa Caulifa Kale Vados Android 21 Supreme Kai of Time/Chronoa Towa Zangya Android 18

Nartleb
NartlebLv14Nartleb

Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.

Aka_Sensei
Aka_SenseiLv2Aka_Sensei

Great writing, both dark yet not too edgy, with a hint of some big events as well. Can't wait for this to peak.

Numix
NumixAuthorNumix

A shameless 5 star review for myself, because why not, the reason I gave myself 5 star review is because I believe even if my story isn't 5 star right now, but by the end of this fic, I am sure, I will be worthy of not just mine but all of your's 5 star reviews. There are bound to be many mistakes, and plotholes, but lets be realistic, even the original story has many mistakes that's why we are hear reading fanfics, so I'll just strive to be better by ever chapter

KingPumpkin3
KingPumpkin3Lv4KingPumpkin3

I really love how you are making this story it’s amazing keep it up

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

hello, i write this for those who trash talk this story, writer San, many times pointed out this is his first time writing FF, and instead to help him and tell him what he should improve you just decided to be as*"'"*" and put him down with your hate, so i request you to just stop reading and move on.

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

Yes Finaly OP Izuku finaly meet Yororozu Momo!!! I can not wait when he and Shoto will have they showdown!!! It was during Sport Festival whare Izuku could in og series help Momo the most, because it was thare she started to question her place in UA and if she truly deserved being recommend student.

mrgoldensun
mrgoldensunLv4mrgoldensun

awesome book but their should be more warnings about what your reading.

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4Dark_PersonJJ

I will soon come back to reading this great Evil Izuku AU story, i just wanted to wait for more chapters to be updated, and do not listen to HATERS AND trash talking.

Deippy_Deippy
Deippy_DeippyLv13Deippy_Deippy

“Symbol of fear” you know I have to give it 5 stars

Syndrome_O
Syndrome_OLv4Syndrome_O

Okay so I have read many mha fanfics . This has the potential to be really good . Author has chosen a very good timeline , the world building is immaculate . The only issue i have is that you keep repeating words, ideas or concepts ... like saying the same thing in three different ways in the same sentence . I don't know if that's to increase the word count but it really makes me uncomfortable to keep reading the same thing . The pacing could be increased , it's not important to describe each and everyones thoughts and actions . Other than that keep up the good work 👍

GIHON_SIAPE
GIHON_SIAPELv2GIHON_SIAPE

This is a very great novel, I beg you 🙏🙏to continue until the end😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................,............

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