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AlastorGF
AlastorGFLv11mth
2024-10-01 15:18

Lo intente lo juro, pero este MC es realmente estúpido de nacimiento y eso se ve claramente cuando amenaza a All for One como si nada, sale todo perfecto no hay enojo ni ataques..... El mayor villano fue insultado tratado como un niño y solo se rió....... El autor cree que el MC es inteligente pero es el mayor estúpido del que leí en mí vida

MHA:-Glitch In Reality

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184 Chs

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I don't think there's anything stupid in threatening him, when he could simply chose Izuku over Shigaraki if he proves his worth, and most importantly if someone like AFO who's lived for 200 years then he would be the one stupid if he got provoked by a kid that's not even 1/4th of his age...like seriously if AFO got provoked by some no name kid who's barely 15 would he have the respect of someone who's big bad of the whole series

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ELKO
ELKOLv3

Reveal spoiler

8mth

Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.

10mth
BoredCrow
BoredCrowLv3

this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award

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Mcho_
Mcho_Lv4

only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario

8mth
ArkonKnight
ArkonKnightLv3

I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍

9mth
Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_CharlesLv11

great concept, we're still really early on but it has lots of potential.the grammar could be improved, but it's not necessarily bad and you could do with better exposition and find a better way to get point across.

11mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.

7mth
RE295
RE295Lv4

the execution is just poor & everything feels flat. worst is probably the beginning being a near carbon copy of MHA: Undying but 1000x times worse

6mth
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Very interesting story, i like your writing and how plot is done, And i hope Yoyorozu Momowill join to his side. Momo in bikini pic for you as my thanks for the story.

11mth
Nartleb
NartlebLv14

Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.

9mth
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