Reviews of MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
I just want to say that your intro and starting of the novel was great and all until you reach chapter 44 ..the mc meets a girl and becomes flipping retarded by giving in to a girl just because she is pretty...the mc was just about to get op but noooooo! The freaking author just had to ruin it by doing this crappy character development. Manipulative, and controlling females? Not my cup of tea. Sorry but im dropping this novel. Was great while it lasted.
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Feels like beginner writers first story. Well I do hope the author develops his writing and gets better. A lot of the game backround feels similar to some popular mmorg books. If you really like game books you may try to read it thow. Just some points why I droped it: Real world itself makes no sense. Mc feels like robot (just motions no feeling). The bad guys are morons as in arrogant characters with no brains. The game has been there 100 years and no one has discovered that you should act nice with npc to get quests?
This is my first review so forgive my inexperience. To begin let's talk about the world background. After years of fighting against each other, the four great races (Humans, Orcs, Light Elves, and Dark Elves) decided that instead of destroying the world in their wars, they would create a pact. This pact restricts wars between the four races in the real world, moving their battlefield to the virtual world. They created a game called "Project: Unknown" to host these battles. Our MC has just turned 16, which is the age humans are initiated to play "Project: Unknown". Background reminds me of a book called "Insignia". So far, I haven't really come across any big problems in terms of the story, albeit we are only seven chapters in. The MC hasn't been shown to be a skilled fighter (Hasn't been in any combat yet, though he did spend a little over a month learning to use all beginner weapons against wooden dummies), nor has he been shown to be a great tactician. He has however, been shown to have great patience, he spent a month practicing with the beginner weapons, and then worked in a mine for a little over two-weeks. (1.5 - 2 months of play and he's still at level 1) The only problem I would say I have with this novel would be the grammar. To me the grammar isn't too big a problem since you can still get the intended meaning from the lines, sometimes you might even get a good laugh out of the mistakes. I feel like this novel can be a good read so I'm going to stick with it for now and see where it goes.
Your story Backgound is interesting but it was not really writen much after the intro and i fand this the best part of your story. Writing quality is bad, you can read the story but to many gramar fault but the greteatst BS is your characters in the story. To many bad cliches. lack of consistency and logic, when i have read the story i was thinking are all persons in the game idiots or 5 year old children?
Honest Review The Good: Love the background of this! Nothing very new, but still different than a standard video game novel. I also like it that it doesn't have any reincarnation or some other cheat system like so many on here do. The Bad: MC started out good, but he suddenly went dumb around chapter 44... The women swoon over the MC waaay to easily, the plot convenience is very strong in this, like how does he happen to find a legacy item when the hundreds of thousands before him missed it? The gaming system itself needs improvement, it feels like the author doesn't have much experience with gaming. This isn't a bad thing, but going 4 months without even getting one level is a little much. Lastly, premium chapters so soon is terrible... It's not hard to tell this is someone's first novel and charging SS for it is a bit shameless. We may love those kinds of characters in novels, but not in real life.
Unless you want to read a story full of loopholes with no basic concept and A author that doesn't give a s*** about details and just shove the story up your face which half of it doesn't make sense this is not the story for you I can go on and say all about the stupidity of the design of the game backgrounds the stupid ass quests that makes s*** for sense all the events that happened around the character the leveling system the quest rewards in the crazy s*** that happens around the protagonist when he is level one are you ****ing me this story has been nothing but a waste of my time and yours if you're interested in reading it this is my advice for you take it or leave it (you have been warned)
So no spoilers. This book so far as I have read which is to Chapter 20. I know it is not a lot the translation seems to be machined or the person who translate does not understand English needs to be edited bad. You can get the gist of what is going on. The overall story is not horrible but the MC plot armor is super thick everything just happens no build up or accident. I think it was suppose to be accidental but if so the author or translater all failed that. Otherwise I would at least give this a shot for the free chaps and if you like it keep going. For me till this thing is edited to make sense I am done.
The character has no backbone, couldn't even refuse a simple request from a girl. Disappointment. I like the idea of the story, but the characters are just bad. Forced and emotionless. Also, the MC is cowardly and dense. Not being able to connect any information. It was clearly forced for the plot. Ultimately I'm dropping the story because of the MC's lack of strong will to oppose others and terrible character development. Which resulted in a bad MC.