Review Detail of king14341 in MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

Item: MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

king14341Lv104yrking14341

This nobel... I felt it has lot of potential.... In the beginning it was quite good... But after 50 chaps... Many things have no logic or common sense.... Grammer mistakes....

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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Shiro_MSFALv4Shiro_MSFA

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

4yr

king14341Lv10king14341

Ok... I will read again from beginning... And reply....

Shiro_MSFA:Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

4yr