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Review Detail of Kerail in MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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Kerail
KerailLv124yrKerail

Feels like beginner writers first story. Well I do hope the author develops his writing and gets better. A lot of the game backround feels similar to some popular mmorg books. If you really like game books you may try to read it thow. Just some points why I droped it: Real world itself makes no sense. Mc feels like robot (just motions no feeling). The bad guys are morons as in arrogant characters with no brains. The game has been there 100 years and no one has discovered that you should act nice with npc to get quests?

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MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4Shiro_MSFA

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

TheThoughtlessOne
TheThoughtlessOneLv3TheThoughtlessOne

It's "Please help me fix my novel by reviewing it and telling me what's wrong and right."

Shiro_MSFA:Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)
grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv14grimmhorizon

also it pays to talk to people and not copy any paste

shayd8066
shayd8066Lv14shayd8066

Mmhmm yes I also agree