Honest Review The Good: Love the background of this! Nothing very new, but still different than a standard video game novel. I also like it that it doesn't have any reincarnation or some other cheat system like so many on here do. The Bad: MC started out good, but he suddenly went dumb around chapter 44... The women swoon over the MC waaay to easily, the plot convenience is very strong in this, like how does he happen to find a legacy item when the hundreds of thousands before him missed it? The gaming system itself needs improvement, it feels like the author doesn't have much experience with gaming. This isn't a bad thing, but going 4 months without even getting one level is a little much. Lastly, premium chapters so soon is terrible... It's not hard to tell this is someone's first novel and charging SS for it is a bit shameless. We may love those kinds of characters in novels, but not in real life.
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