While the author had an interesting concept, it is quickly lost in a pile of bad cliches. This could be forgiven if not for the poor writing and complete lack of consistency.
Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)
I have read the first chapter and given some input. I also added the story to my library and will keep going as time allows. Thank you for the invitation!