Review Detail of mrb in MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

Item: MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

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Though story had potential.....I was wrong. Basically turned into a harem erotica, what little good the story had died after about 30 chaps.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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Shiro_MSFALv4Shiro_MSFA

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

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