Review Detail of AzureMystic in MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

Id like to start off by saying that the concept behind the novel has alot of potential, four races create a vr mmorpg where participation is somewhat mandatory after a certain age and most conflicts are settled in game rather than real life. However none of the important parts of the novel are explained such as why his parents dont help him out when hes just starting out or play with him at all and why his school is so loose with rules/regulations regarding the game when they dont teach anything else, how he manages to find a legacy item somewhere that hundreds if not thousands of people visit regularly for years, the small amount of classes even though the game has been running for hundreds of years, the company/ people behind the game i dont think was mentioned and they have not become a huge super power even though they built something so important, why three women who are 7-9 years older than him fall in love ludicrously fast, why he gains a huge amount of money but hides it for fear of the government coming after him instead of using it for his family, why a 16 year old kid doesnt act like one when hes had a relatively normal upbringing and doesnt have any actual issues and one the author claims to be shy and introverted doesnt behave that way half the time, why the MC has actually no friends not even close acquaintances even though he has lived for 16 years, why people treat NPC’s like dirt even though being courteous at least leads to more opportunities and quests even after hundreds of years of the game being around, how the MC seems stronger than average characters even though he hasnt put any points into stats (before he gets his wolf partner), why the “CLASS” quest that he gets requires him to run all over the game world before getting ANY ability or even the class name, the authors fetish with black cloaks and the way he introduces them, why does the MC need to keep everything a secret when the major powers offered him benefits in exchange and the did so somewhat respectfully instead of chasing him down and killing him to level one, why he bought a mask if he doesnt take off the cloak around people except his harem and NPC’s. I have a lot more things i could add but i already passed 2k characters so ill end it there, but please get an editor and translator, everytime i read a novel like this i cant help but feel it would be at least 2x as good in the native language of the author and a “rough” translation to english brings the story down.