This is my first review so forgive my inexperience. To begin let's talk about the world background. After years of fighting against each other, the four great races (Humans, Orcs, Light Elves, and Dark Elves) decided that instead of destroying the world in their wars, they would create a pact. This pact restricts wars between the four races in the real world, moving their battlefield to the virtual world. They created a game called "Project: Unknown" to host these battles. Our MC has just turned 16, which is the age humans are initiated to play "Project: Unknown". Background reminds me of a book called "Insignia". So far, I haven't really come across any big problems in terms of the story, albeit we are only seven chapters in. The MC hasn't been shown to be a skilled fighter (Hasn't been in any combat yet, though he did spend a little over a month learning to use all beginner weapons against wooden dummies), nor has he been shown to be a great tactician. He has however, been shown to have great patience, he spent a month practicing with the beginner weapons, and then worked in a mine for a little over two-weeks. (1.5 - 2 months of play and he's still at level 1) The only problem I would say I have with this novel would be the grammar. To me the grammar isn't too big a problem since you can still get the intended meaning from the lines, sometimes you might even get a good laugh out of the mistakes. I feel like this novel can be a good read so I'm going to stick with it for now and see where it goes.
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LIKEWhen reviewing, i suggest not turning on the spoiler button, as it completely blocks the review unless you tap/click it. Next add a section without spoilers first, then go and add as many spoilers as you want on a section afterward. It may also be a good idea to tell people how big the spoilers are, some people (myself included) like minor spoilers to see if a book is worth a read. Just make sure the point were the spoilers start is as hard to miss as possible.
You ruined it for me with pedo trope I dropped right afterwards... the mc is too moronic and clearly is swayed by semi nude females... if you can't have a mc control his lust then just have him be run over and make a new mc please for the love of all that's readable remove this trash of a trope you seem to think people wana see
Rawr_Kitten:You ruined it for me with pedo trope I dropped right afterwards... the mc is too moronic and clearly is swayed by semi nude females... if you can't have a mc control his lust then just have him be run over and make a new mc please for the love of all that's readable remove this trash of a trope you seem to think people wana see