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Review Detail of EveningSong in MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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EveningSong
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This novel was struck by the curse of the failure rabbit. It was quite good until the female love interest became a harem in training. Then all the interesting bits was buried under a pile of boring and the novel died. Dropped as of chapter 80. Thanks for about 30 good chapters Mr. Author. I might check back in 6 months or so to see what happens.

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MMORPG: The Tales of Souls

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Shiro_MSFA
Shiro_MSFALv4Shiro_MSFA

Please review my novel EEWAO. Eng-V (Game novel blue white cover) Im still learning tho. Please help me fix my novel by review wich wrong wich right. I take bad comment, but please show me wich part that need fix. Your review will really really make me happy. Thanks. Hope u have a nice day :)

booklover95
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Yes !! Totaly true for harem in training! So sad the writer has to involve women in. I think it could have been a whole lot better if women were more of a little background but not taking over the story ! I mean i scroll throught when he starts talking about women and how he doesn't have any expierence with women. I literaly sing bla bla bla in my head! So boring. It's like how much more interesting could it have been if aĺl the times the writes talks about women and lovers, he would have used to continue the mainstory. It's a pity that his editor or helper didn't tell him this because he's losing readers by writing like this.

Garo_
Garo_Lv5Garo_

Yep. I also dropped it because of this.