DxD | Child of Ira

Spoiler...........terrible time skip, author really rushed everything.All his nobility is introduced at once and in just a few sentences we see his clan and family suddenly it was destroyed

This fic is boring, almost a chore to read because.1) There is too much over explanation, like seriously, there are 4 to 6 paragraphs over explaining everything in every chapter.2) The chapters are too short, and 90 percent of the chapters are just filled with those over explanation of what the mc is thinking, doing, surroundings, useless information, etc...3) I have read all the chapters as of now, from chapters 1 to 21. and all that could have been done in literally 5 or 6 chapters if being generous.there are more things to say here, but these are the main problems that need to be fixed first, that's all.

I believe this is the first time I've written a review but the recent chapters have disappointed me so much. The book in the beginning is good but it is these last 3-4 chapters, 40-44, have either seemed rushed and/or forced so much that it loses all semblance of what it previously was

It was nice before chapter 44 I think. That one was so garbage I directly dropped fic

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nice background and political situation has been given much attention, awesome work by author..... Hope you can revive Ai hoshino as his Q[img=update]

Horrible. Frustrating. Not worth it and a waste of time.

It was good in the beginning but then it was so rushed and the time skip was so bad I have decided to drop it at chapter 40 something don’t feel like checking which

its starts off amazing, and then at like chapter 40 the author decided to destory everything good about the story and never take any feedback. I have never seen a story go from so good to so bad before. I honestly belive someone else took over the authors account. don't read, save your self the utter frustration

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you don't know me ................................................................................................................................................. but I wish you a nice day.

It was so amazing up until the end of volume 1

My god, this ff is a chore. Author makes it realistic a bit too much that it sucks out all of the fantastical things I like in ff.

I have read this I Have to say awesome work author keep it going

OK, it was good but after the time skip, the MC had two kids and I didn’t like it anymore

While this story had too much info dumping, it was still interesting. Yet the plot twist after his fight with a certain chicken completely ruined the story for me. It felt forced and rushed, and the follow-up was even more rushed. He suddenly has all his peer members, prominent side characters, and becomes an ice berg. You were doing so well author up until that point.

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I really was loving it up till deaths happened and his personality basically changed. It felt rushed and just wasn’t the same after that but I did love the writing quality before THAT certain event happened.

Five. Stars cause I feel bad 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃