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2024-03-28 00:53

While this story had too much info dumping, it was still interesting. Yet the plot twist after his fight with a certain chicken completely ruined the story for me. It felt forced and rushed, and the follow-up was even more rushed. He suddenly has all his peer members, prominent side characters, and becomes an ice berg. You were doing so well author up until that point.

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