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AtemNCLv141yr
2023-12-12 08:35

Listen it started great but i mean come on. As soon a we got a time skip that was already questionable. the behavior of the main character seemed irrational boarder line unhinged. I dont mind a edgy dark mc but its just not done right his parents died so he cuts contact with all his closest people its wierd to me

DxD | Child of Ira

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ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4

Spoiler...........terrible time skip, author really rushed everything.All his nobility is introduced at once and in just a few sentences we see his clan and family suddenly it was destroyed

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sage5156
sage5156Lv4

This fic is boring, almost a chore to read because.1) There is too much over explanation, like seriously, there are 4 to 6 paragraphs over explaining everything in every chapter.2) The chapters are too short, and 90 percent of the chapters are just filled with those over explanation of what the mc is thinking, doing, surroundings, useless information, etc...3) I have read all the chapters as of now, from chapters 1 to 21. and all that could have been done in literally 5 or 6 chapters if being generous.there are more things to say here, but these are the main problems that need to be fixed first, that's all.

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Joseph04
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I believe this is the first time I've written a review but the recent chapters have disappointed me so much. The book in the beginning is good but it is these last 3-4 chapters, 40-44, have either seemed rushed and/or forced so much that it loses all semblance of what it previously was

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Pengu1n_69
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It was nice before chapter 44 I think. That one was so garbage I directly dropped fic

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The_Dark_Hydrax
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Reveal spoiler

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dazzle_dork
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nice background and political situation has been given much attention, awesome work by author..... Hope you can revive Ai hoshino as his Q[img=update]

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Horrible. Frustrating. Not worth it and a waste of time.

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Isaac_Barahona
Isaac_BarahonaLv4

It was good in the beginning but then it was so rushed and the time skip was so bad I have decided to drop it at chapter 40 something don’t feel like checking which

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Carbon_6597
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its starts off amazing, and then at like chapter 40 the author decided to destory everything good about the story and never take any feedback. I have never seen a story go from so good to so bad before. I honestly belive someone else took over the authors account. don't read, save your self the utter frustration

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