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Instant Death [DxD]

Autor: Asthoglho
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Xander Ranvil, the incarnation of death has arrived at the world of DxD. (Note) : First time writing so don't expect anything, if you don't like it then just leave. there would be strong beings arriving at DxD to level the grounds. (Not reincarnators or transmigrators) If you enjoy my stories then please give some support by tip or donation here~ https://ko-fi.com/asthoglho

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Truth_Only_Reader
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I am gonna write a more detailed review than my last one since I only said I just like it. Writing quality, it's has good grammar and everything barely any errors. That readers can usually spot. The only problem I have is of course you included characters from other anime which is fine, but me personally I would love if you focus more on the aspect of the DXD universe more. But I am fine with the MC learning other skills since he is basically death himself. Story Development is good, of course he is gonna be overpowered since he is the literal embodiment of death and there is a lot of funny scenes I love in this novel. Especially his cute obsession with Sona. The pacing is of course a problem in this novel but it can be fixed in the future. Something that I wish you could do is to expand his ability in the field of art a bit more and there are some plot holes in the University Visitation chapter, like what happened with his paintings or sculptures which needed to be somewhat explained. Other than that story development is good so far. Character design is good, its basically DXD and other animes that you could search with Google, I read novels mostly on my phone, so computer users will have a easier time to find the anime characters online. So far so good. Updating Stability is amazing, sometimes we get 1 to 3 chapters a day which is a lot. That is saying a lot also about author dedication and research to this novel. No pressure. World Background, is just DXD with other animes, but the main premise is DXD of course. So far a good novel that I look forward to reading in my day, and I hope you can continue. Hope you can take my review into consideration and that it helps you have to proceed with this novel.

Bierbart
BierbartLv14
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HOSLv4

1. The story is a mix world of multiple anime's. 2. The story focus is slice of life. You can expect this the moment the author added yogiri instant death ability. There's absolutely nothing can harm the guy with how absurdly powerful that ability is in DXD. 3. No he didn't get nerf, he only got the nerf version of his 3 wishes in his drunken state but it's still absurdly powerful. I doubt the ROB who reincarnated him can even give him the full version of instant death. (You can only the full version if you're the personification of the end of everything (including multiverse)and that is the mc of instant death). 4. Like i said this novel focus is slice of life so if you don't like it don't bother ranting on the author since he uses his time to write this. Don't force your likes and don't like on him. 5. As of the chapter 40 the characters still follows their canon personality. They don't feel like a yes dolls you see in most dxd fanfiction. 6. The romance is also properly flesh out and they took time to fall for each other. 7. Author some chapter is unnecessary like the show off chapter in the different school. Those didn't add anything to the story. 8. Also he barely use command t, one of his cheat I think you should use it more author. 9. He looks a bit push over at the start but i think it's a misunderstanding since he enjoy cooking. He also decline the temp transferring school at start only to change his mind because of his system. I will stop here for now, imma add more after i catch up to the newest chapter.

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