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Bierbart10hComentado porCh 107 Chapter 107: Marill- Bierbart1dComentado por
bad real bad... also no reason in reincarnation if he gets all the emotional baggage and low intellect oO i mean... seriously in nobway logical with his behaviour as a reincarnator...
This point Naruto has an amazing plan but..he needed power...power that was what he needed... - Bierbart2dComentado por
meh honestly wouldnt worry.... with her devil fruit age is really just a number *shrug* kinda mote interested in the take of his cheats... honestly with his logia without weaknesses he should be broken... since he should be unaffected by seawater, seastone and haki too... aince thats a general weakness of df too so well... even water in a way since thats the weakness of his logia... add to it immunity to the dark fruit and him being able to eat one extra df but loosing his immunity sadly
Only after I wrote those chapter did Oda reveal Bonneys true age and backstory. When I read the manga at that point I almost spit blood because I had already written too many chapters to change my story. I'm going to tell you right now, Oda revealed a lot in the last few months, so there might be other things as well, nothing I can think of atop of my mind. Bonneys age was the biggest thing. Let's just overlook it 😅 - Bierbart2dComentado por
uff pink shirt? way to make him look wirse than buggy in his clown outfit ... pink as a dude is just hideous as hell. just to be on the safe side... the mc here isnstraight? or is the pairing mcxluffyxsabo since it sounds like this is a real risk here. would be ok but not something i would really like to read about
Ch 3 Chapter 3: Welcome aboard the Black Pearl - Bierbart2dComentado porCh 7 Chapter 7: Danzo's Gaze, Grandma Tsunade?
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the potion and benefit if the bloodline are a joke ... really abd sadly with the chinese origin of the story .... too much repetitions and exxagerations... sadly even if the premise is interesting... but still chinese... trying to sell half an inch as extremely big and gifted in an area... yeah typical sadly
Ch 2 Chapter 2: Is There a Reward for Healing? Let Me Stab Myself First - Bierbart3dComentado por
yup sacrifice not worth it... honestly speaking plot gets worse and worse kinda.. its sad
When "Guardian's Angel" activated, Yoei sacrificed its "cuts all chakra" trait. - Bierbart3dComentado porCh 41 Chapter 40: Extract The Tatsumi Gene And Strengthen The Troops
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soviet worse honestly... especially its only vehicles for the cost reduction.... just bad propaganda here
And if it is an Ore Purifier, the resources you harvest will change from 100,000G to 125,000G, and you can only build 125 vehicles. In terms of income, it is obvious that the Industrial Plant is better. Moreover, the Soviet Union also have other technologies that can be used. For example, the Cloning Vats can copy infantry units, which can increase the expansion of troops extremely quickly. - Bierbart4dComentado por
pretty weak for a boon honestly... with giants and dragons and even gods in the future... surviving is nonsensical plotarmor ex edition with what he got. especially if you add more lore
He will never fly, he will never throw a meteorite back into space, he will never punch the ground and stop an earthquake, ok? I wanted him to be able to grow beyond peak-human of that world. There are so many people who just give their MCs the Super Soldier Serum and I didn't want to do that. My MC should have a minor healing factor and some protection against diseases (Smart Atoms). - Bierbart6dComentado porCh 64 Chapter 64: Striving for the Ability to Tear Up the Contract
- Bierbart7dComentado porCh 28 Chapter 28: The Floating Island Incident (Part 2)