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2023-03-12 09:47

honestly, when the nerfs to the abilities came I was agreeing with some of the comments stating how it was redundant to the story to have the op tag. At that moment it seemed like it was going to be another story with endless nerfs later on and constant annoyances but luckily to my surprise it wasn't as bad as a nerf as I had previously thought. although there was a part stating how he was gonna seal the instant death ability right near the end of the first chapter. I think that part specifically for me put me off a good amount but the truth is that he does still use the ability as when someone uses killing intent towards him they do still die so after reading that part I was not as torn up about it as before. I recommend that part be changed a bit as in that moment it seems like he will really never use that ability. Over all I think the writing is good and the pace as well. 5/5 - there are definitely things that could be done to make it better and some structural changes to the writing as well so others don't interpret certain things wrong but I'm not a hard critique and I enjoyed the story.

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Truth_Only_Reader
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I am gonna write a more detailed review than my last one since I only said I just like it. Writing quality, it's has good grammar and everything barely any errors. That readers can usually spot. The only problem I have is of course you included characters from other anime which is fine, but me personally I would love if you focus more on the aspect of the DXD universe more. But I am fine with the MC learning other skills since he is basically death himself. Story Development is good, of course he is gonna be overpowered since he is the literal embodiment of death and there is a lot of funny scenes I love in this novel. Especially his cute obsession with Sona. The pacing is of course a problem in this novel but it can be fixed in the future. Something that I wish you could do is to expand his ability in the field of art a bit more and there are some plot holes in the University Visitation chapter, like what happened with his paintings or sculptures which needed to be somewhat explained. Other than that story development is good so far. Character design is good, its basically DXD and other animes that you could search with Google, I read novels mostly on my phone, so computer users will have a easier time to find the anime characters online. So far so good. Updating Stability is amazing, sometimes we get 1 to 3 chapters a day which is a lot. That is saying a lot also about author dedication and research to this novel. No pressure. World Background, is just DXD with other animes, but the main premise is DXD of course. So far a good novel that I look forward to reading in my day, and I hope you can continue. Hope you can take my review into consideration and that it helps you have to proceed with this novel.

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