Bananaking123

You never finished watching Anime? Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine, for example, the scene in which Issei pervs on Asia's panties, which appears in the anime, is not exist in the light novel. Their first meeting is portrayed in a much more poetic manner in the light novel. He also never perv on Raynare when she is killing him in light novel too

This is the worst chapter ever; I feel like my brain is rotten from reading it.

Judging from the looks of it, this story seems like it will be a self-fulfilling fantasy where the protagonist collects girls like Pokémon, gains powers through s*x, and eventually becomes something like a harem god emperor.

The same response I give the guy above, I gave the story three stars because it's only the beginning, and I'm not sure what score to give yet. So I giving a middle ground score here.

Whoa hold on a second, there's no need to get defensive or offensive. I gave the story three stars because it's only the beginning, and I'm not sure what score to give yet. There's no reason to insult me for giving a middle ground score here.

Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic, Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine, for example, the scene in which Issei pervs on Asia's panties, which appears in the anime, is not exist in the light novel. Their first meeting is portrayed in a much more poetic manner in the light novel.

Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine, for example, the scene in which Issei pervs on Asia's panties, which appears in the anime, is not exist in the light novel. Their first meeting is portrayed in a much more poetic manner in the light novel.

Seriously, is that even necessary? 95% of reincarnated characters always start off with a gamer system, three wishes from a god, and an overpowered race or background, and even the remaining 5% still have their own set of cheats to rely on. They would have no trouble surviving on their own, so why would they need the Boosted Gear, which would just make them a target for others? It seems like mere greed and unnecessary risk.

You said "Rias is gonna toughen up and won't be that helpless damsel from the anime." Thank to the last words, i thought you based this on anime