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This_Young_Lord
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2023-03-28 02:20

This is good... Honestly, it is but I fell like most people don't give respect to whom respect is due when it comes to fanfics. What the author is likely insinuating is that with some cheat ability, any random person could kill a multiversal level existence. No matter how you look at it, Veldanava is a multiversal level existence on the same level as One Above All and The Presence, and just because someone has a concept of death doesn't mean they call kill them. Maybe it's because Tensura is just an anime while Marvel and DC comics are quite old is the reason why no one undermine One above All and The Presence. I'm just saying my piece here.

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Asthoglho
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I understand your piece.. even I don't know what tier Veldanava is, he might be tier 0 or the highest tier 1-A. But I based everything on fic that I read, it was stated there that Ivaraje was equal to Veldanava to maintain balance but that Ivaraje was killed by the embodiment of Cause and Effect. Sorry, if I got the wrong idea about him.

This_Young_Lord
This_Young_LordLv14

You see, that's the issue here, they were equal. Veldanava was even said to be stronger. The story of Veldanava is that, "in the beginning, before even time and space were a thing, there existed a will." That will was Veldanava. After creating all that existed, he found that he knew what will happen and still grew bored leading to him sacrificing his omnipotence and omniscience. Then came ivarage from beyond his multiverse, a being of chaos, which even when Veldanava gave up his omnipotence and omniscience, he still managed to defeat and seal him away. Now, please tell me, how are these two capable of being ranked in the same category? This is just like comparing One Above All to Knull. If you're a true marvel fan and I write that these two were comparable in strength, would you still read that book? Do a little research on some existence before writing about them, that's what you do as an author before you write a book. Research. That's the

Asthoglho:I understand your piece.. even I don't know what tier Veldanava is, he might be tier 0 or the highest tier 1-A. But I based everything on fic that I read, it was stated there that Ivaraje was equal to Veldanava to maintain balance but that Ivaraje was killed by the embodiment of Cause and Effect. Sorry, if I got the wrong idea about him.
This_Young_Lord
This_Young_LordLv14

Most authors do what you do in name of creating their own. Good tell us ahead of time that this is your AU or something. That way we'll know what expect.

Asthoglho
AsthoglhoAuthor

I see... thank you?

This_Young_Lord:Most authors do what you do in name of creating their own. Good tell us ahead of time that this is your AU or something. That way we'll know what expect.
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