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A multiverse fan-fiction

Author: 41_Claws
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Read A multiverse fan-fiction fanfiction written by the author 41_Claws on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, romance, adventure, reincarnation, r18. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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A man died due to the mistake of God, and got the chance to Reincarnate in random universe with some cheats. He reincarnated in MCU as a Mutated Kryptonian. . - First world:Marvel -Second World: Not decided yet.

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skyhound
skyhoundLv14skyhound

Read up to chapter 23, I legitimately enjoyed parts of this story but its flaws really hold it back. Specifically in terms of characterization and story pacing. In my opinion there is a lack of depth in dialogue, character relationships and overall story. Mc has some character development in the beginning and with the Ancient One. Outside of his humor he's not a compelling enough character for me. He's a recluse whose only real motivation is to get stronger. Aside from reluctantly involving himself in hero work. Any relationship he has with characters is skimmed over and awkward. I.E him making Bruce Banner his butler, changing his name and demeanor, which was just a bit too absurd. His relationship with Nick Fury and Avengers feels one note. The romance is also clumsy, and forced. It felt contrived for Mc to have a past wife who was basically a doppelganger of Scarlet Witch. Just to have a reason for him stalk the real one years later. The story pacing is what ultimately sinks story quality for me. The MCU plot feels stuck on rails. The only real changes are a few dead characters are saved. Even with that the story follows the exact same beats. Since a few scenes here and there are copied word for word from the movies. The story makes it clear the MCU is just a pitstop for the Mc. So the world doesn't feel explored at all. We just skim over his time in world war 2 and speed run through a few MCU movies. We don't even get a hero name for him even after he saves the day. Thanks for reading my review and please excuse my rambling.

PheonixRising41
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_Anuar_
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bro is a assassin he really assassinated characters of marvel in a different way.

Virtuosso
VirtuossoLv14Virtuosso

You had one job author.... But you messed it up 💀the mc sucks, the others characters suck and even wanda has become irritating like iris in flash, which I never thought was possible in any marvel fanfic. just put this fic out of its misery 💀💀

Jayaraj_Jay
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Arnab_Roy_6397
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This is almost copy of the movies. Didn't change anything because author can't write after that. Too much time skip. Charcter is useless although having a lot of powers.

Lizrock
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Lizrock
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Santu_Banerjee
Santu_BanerjeeLv4Santu_Banerjee

it's a nice fanfiction that I like, I hope you continue this fanfiction

Quick_Ben
Quick_BenLv4Quick_Ben

A very decent novel I recommend everyone to read it, the main character is very fleshed out and not cringy, and not a simp. I like how he handles the situation and his involvement .

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv13OVERKILL

story is ended in less than 20 chapters , all i see is fillers . he love is less then desirable. author just for making up word count write anything that will make this more boring .

Twice_James153
Twice_James153Lv4Twice_James153

Here, have a good review! I like the story and can't really understand why it's rating is so low. So, here you go: 5 stars!

Dorian_Marzec
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oobess
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DaoistDTW9tz
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I just started reading it and can't wait for the next chapter 👍

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
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Good story can have improvements too much time skip. And if possible add some romance. Can you tell me who was his wife ? ❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓

Sterky67
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Nathan_Golder
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Another trash story, maybe it's good maybe it isn't but the second you lie and claim it's the MCU when it clearly isn't your story is automatically trash.

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