skyhound

I can't disagree with this review, after reading 20 chapters. It has almost no plot development to keep me interested beyond the premise. The kid sitting in Tony's lab can only keep my attention for so long. I think the author should adjust the pacing and find a better way to incorporate the kid. While also having Tony progress through his MCU narrative.

This cliffhanger is too much, I need that next chapter 😓

With the fate of humanity on the line this mindset is a must. It's why I really respect soldiers who are willing to lay down their life for the innocent.

In my opinion you should write about the protagonist that you want to write about. I actually like the Mc, he fits in with the strawhat crew. What makes Luffy so endearing is his kindness and adventure loving attitude. So having a ruthless Mc hinders that by a lot.

I remember reading this way back on the spacebattle and questionable question forums. The author Fulcon dropped it because he wrote himself into a corner with certain decisions. Like having him learn Jutsu instantly with exp. Also he felt ashamed at certain decisions with the underage harem. The author actually has Asperger's which I only mention because his Mc shares that trait. I mainly liked this story because it was one of the first naruto fics I read with rpg elements.

Someone that does this is absolute scum, even a robber needs standards.

Looks interesting so far, with rolls being based on milestones. He'll need a comprehensive body upgrade before facing off any flying brick types. I don't know how fast the Sandevistan makes you. The benchmark would need to be Omnimans combat speed. If you can survive that you should be ok for a while. Thanks for the chapter 👍

Isn't this going a bit too far? I'd understand beating him up within an inch of his life. Maybe this version of his is a villain but I don't know.