OVERKILL

read upto 40 something chapters started off good , but after that ... in chapter 25 he entered a train station simulation and it hadn't end yet till chapter 214, i think author dropped it . 13 days and no update. i haven't read all those 200+ chapters . so you can give it a try at least first few chapters 😅

dump it to vit

sorry about that rambling in middle of a fanfic

it involves money . i also wish to establish some shops in centre of my city but people who are already there don't want more compilation so higher land prices , bribes, social standing is also a thing ( basically discriminating a weeker race , area , religion, political views , cast etc.) , que. - does the puppy eyes still works ? ans. - yes, it works everywhere depends on the puppy 🐶 .

did you regret that shot now . govt. made sure that everyone gets a shot . now they admit that covid shot was not good for health and caused many deaths but we ( the govt. ) didn't force anyone , all the citizens who took that shot did it by their own FREE WILL . some people took more than one shot and now they are getting sick just by eating normal food . a week of smoking made them breathless, alcohol become poison to them. sexual life become a horror to them 💀 they can't describe to anyone. my buddy is one of them 🫠, he almost hospitalised after a drink party . he getting married soon but not excited at all , virgine till now , zero girlfriend. 24 years old , lost most of his hair , his beard is still growing.

as synopsis said i didn't read a single chapter because the 1st chapter was chapter -368 ( holding hands -5 ) and later was holding hand 6 and 7 if this make any sense ,.........

felt the same human touch in first few chapters were refreshing but story felt non progressive. after few more chapters the human touch lost

read 8 chaptera i liked the writing, first 2 chapters were really good but. the world background is not clear the story felt like not progressing at all- same sh¡t again and again no improvement MC'S mentality felt really good in first few chapters 👌 ( keep it up ) I'm not a fan of Minecraft so it doesn't make me hyped enough for the story i was hoping for some cultivation while using game mechanics conclusion- not for me , but its not bad either may be a Minecraft player can enjoy this

WTF🙃, I wrote a whole ass review based on synopsis 💀

in the description of the story author is describing what tsunade and shijune is wearing 🙄 or how hot they are looking . now what can you expect 🤔 from this kind of author. i haven't read a single chapter of this , but still writing a review on my first impression . writing quality and character development can be seen in the description and world background is basically stolen because it's a fan fiction. only thing remains is the story development but u guys can comment here if it's good or not