i see hard work

plz don't do these lines , i usually listen to novels and these annoying .

😂😂🤣🤣🤣

dunk becoming a sage 🤔

but it's good the way it is .

good question , u asked a good question . author didn't mentioned her name yet

agreed 👍

thx

somehow feels boring , can't connect to MC or other characters . or maybe story telling is not good enough , keep up good work, at it wasn't a frustrating . i don't think MC has any cheats , author is not describing his powers clearly in starting chapter , it all about chatting with two random girls one is hayuga and other is uchiha. even sikamaru has more personality than these three combined . u could have described some of his future goals or his training .

good enough for me to search it on Google for free read . and i couldn't find any site that has this novel for free , strange! i found a Chinese web site and using Google translator on it. this platform (web novel ) has lost all hope and I'm not goona spend a single coin on it. i paid many time before when this was a new platform but now paying is not worth it.

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at least some one get it😁 , but it wasn't overkill . let me explain clearly :- ---------------- i wanna tell author that it was great atmosphere going in the story , i feels like it's happening in a different universe . so don't ruin it with A/N and modern joke as your self . instead use his inner monologue or third pov or something else . i don't mind joke but those A/N ruined many novels . A/N can make a novel into fanfiction of low standard

thx bro👍

i was hoping for some cultivation stuff, getting stronger slowly but i didn't see it. first chapter gave me hope for a reincarnation , system , and cultivation. but i have read almost 15 chapters i can't find any of that . what i found is that there are TWO MC, a male and a female . both have a system ( that wasn't mentioned in details , no lvl ups , no quest , just weird reward ) . things shifts around like devil fruit , mobile phone building a gundom , marriage , girls . male MC is some how top tier ruin master ( not explained at all , just author said it you believe it , no progression from start , no build up nothing ) then MC make some kind of nuke. random bullsh¡t is flying every where and you have to make sense out of it . both MC are bickering to each other in every single chapter . and this bickering is the main story i guess . Ward background : -- ZERO CULTIVATION REALM. : - ZERO explaination CHARACTER - two mc with systems , that it .SYSTEM - author didn't care about it , it helps the plot to progress in very rare ocacasions. and pretty much a click Bait .

boring .... . author tried to explain his thoughts more than the story itself . no base for story

boring , i read almost 10 chapters , i thought this will be because it has more than 200 chapters . it took so many words just to start the story . i was patient , but when it starts it becomes boring. [img=sad]

aahh this gobu gobu , i wanna see something interesting

this author wrote many books but most of them ate dropped and had 10-30 chapters max.

too boring with no attachment to story , a guy died got system (without any explanation ) , get points by people emotions , buy stuff , more he buys the expensive other things got ( that were cheaper before but proceeds to buy random s*t ) , i don't remember any conversations or monologue. this guys and story doesn't feel right to me . no good characters other than MC . system and his deeds are boring . there was nothing that annoyed me , but i felt bored .

lol again