Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!

The mc sucks. A fantasy about smoking weed and being a loner. Also being a super awesome biker in Twilight. Not seeing much personality besides that. Not even hints of a more interesting one :/ Would've stuck around to give it a better chance, but when I saw the story wasted our time describing him selling weed it was too hard to ignore what this was about. Writing Quality - 3 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4

In short MC is a system user who is also a drug adict and smokes EVERY time; he is mister perfect everyone likes him for being a drug dealer. Teachers like him even thou he is being late EVERYTIME but are ok with why? because he has good grades yeah!!! police let him break the law multiple time reason? because Plot!!! Best Friends Parent's likes him why because the MC give they own kids drugs yeah!!!

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All I see is drug addict emo kid who think he is superior to all Truth to be told i don’t se any character development 24/7 he just want to be high

Half the story is just him being high and so ping for a girl. Everyone likes him even his coach even tho he knows the mc is like the biggest drug dealer in the school. Then his personality is kinda trash with an average plot line. Author also didn’t post for like 2-3 weeks cause he was setting up some patreon thing and is putting the fic behind a paywall for a barely average fan fic

The mc is your typical smartass deliquent that makes you wonder if he is a reincarnation or just an oc with a system and foreknowledge. There are some few grammatical errors but it doesn't seem a major problem yet. The interactions are okay but it needs more work so that it wouldn't feel awkward. Overall, I might change the rating if there's further improvement in the writing.

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Great fic so far.I highly recommend it. Trust me, you only need the first chapter to lock you in, and you will know for yourself if you would like it or not.

good until he introduced a Rosalie as a mate and still chose the character he made his celebrity crush (even tho he did that in his other story too) and picked shifter powerset which is crazy for someone whose supposed to look like urek mazino. The dialogue is mostly the main character getting high or simping for ana de Armas and her family. And i do mean simping because the MC's 2 modes are when he's with her and when he isn't.

Goated story, don’t listen to the other reviewers who are simply mad due to the Mc smoking habits. It is refreshing for once to not have a basic copy pasted Mc in a reincarnation webnovel fanfic. The story is grammatically very good, pacing is not too fast not too slow in my opinion and helps follow the Mc through both his thought process and actions. The Mc has Sims like powers, that are pretty well done, allowing him to not be OP. I would recommend this story to anyone that isn’t a braindead generic webnovel reader who is looking for an actual good story with actual plot.

Good story as of chapter 11 so I think picking shifter power wise is a lil dumb

5|4|1|2|3 meh...it's mid. 3 main things about this fic: 1. mc smokes weed 2. he does a little simping (just a little) 3. he smokes a lot of weed XD ps. why is this in the TL section??

Need more this is a really good story and better than more other twilight fanfic

Hey there, I decided to wait and see when you'll update but it's been a month and no sign of you, please don't say you've dropped it

I've been following this book since the beginning and it's actually nice like the type that makes me wait for it throughout the day, I actually thought I had given it a review but just realised I hadn't, great job author.

Is he gonna end up with Leah and Rosalie? If not, I’m not continuing because him being with Leah while he has the mate bond with Rosalie is annoying and upsetting when you include her horrible past and now she won’t even get the chance to truly be happy and will forever be alone with that one mate per person thing

this fanfic has positive and negative points and I am not gonna talk about it because i am not a critique . it brings change from other twilight fics . MC being carefree and enjoying life whereas in other MC fully accept mate bond and try to assert dominance i never liked the mate bond type of situation. maybe i wrote to much . meh!🥱🥱

Quick warning. Harem Harem Harem. had a lot of potential, mc felt like an actual person living in twilight instead of just being in twilight, the relationships the mc formed feels natural and very real, his persona and reputation is also very well written, he's made to be a sort of an outsider but he's no cut off, still easily a very social person who anyone can vibe with. You didn't feel too much outside influence in the story or anything cringe which youd' expect from most movie fanfics especially twilight. Had it as a very good read. Then Haram was introduced and rip.

Love The Urek Mazino Cover. My favorite fiction is Tower of God. Your Shameless: Growing Up As Carl Gallagher was great. Keep it up Bro. I hope that U would finsh Twilight Fanifc.

Love the story so far and I like the fact that he doesn't immediately fall in love with someone do to the imprinting or mate bond which seems like a bit of an easy way out. I also like how his system isn't completely overpowered and I like the slice of life storyline where he goes day by day. I hope he eventually makes his own pack or group I also wouldn't mind some other crossovers or maybe even background plots of the main story. It is different than most twilight fanfics and I hope to see the author continue it in a way that is not like the other ones.