The mc sucks. A fantasy about smoking weed and being a loner. Also being a super awesome biker in Twilight. Not seeing much personality besides that. Not even hints of a more interesting one :/ Would've stuck around to give it a better chance, but when I saw the story wasted our time describing him selling weed it was too hard to ignore what this was about. Writing Quality - 3 Stability of Updates - 4 Story Development - 3 Character Design - 1 World Background - 4
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LIKEAkGreyback:Dude the story is not fully even started yet, Mc will get more time for development
Agree, finally someone understands, they think that readers are forced to read and wait for the character to develop, and forget the basics of common sense
Hakujo:the author should have considered "first impressions" if there will be such thing
You definitely have some ideas. But I'm up here on the moon faking the landings. Can we discuss later?
Voided_fox:First off dont you know you can find the twilight series in the fantasy section in the library? And you don’t like how he did it make your own or go back to reading Chinese novels ware the mc f**ks children
Daoist_Dan:You definitely have some ideas. But I'm up here on the moon faking the landings. Can we discuss later?image
reason because he was right? or because it is your dream? or is this your live in short discriped as a drug junkie?
AstralNinja420:You my sir are garbage
Voided_fox:First off dont you know you can find the twilight series in the fantasy section in the library? And you don’t like how he did it make your own or go back to reading Chinese novels ware the mc f**ks children
We must've come across the same ones. They get dropped after a couple of chapters. Twilight fan fics have the shortest lifespan in webnovel.
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1 it's a review your supposed to be honest when making a review 2 that makes me wanna read it less compared to this review
Destiny_henry_1762:guys you are just dissing someone's else work, if you don't like it then it's good. then say so, to me the work is great, I like weed and when the mutated weed came out I laughed cos I found it funny
CrownClown666:We must've come across the same ones. They get dropped after a couple of chapters. Twilight fan fics have the shortest lifespan in webnovel.image
I wrote one some time ago, the thing with Twilight fics is that the author just wants to write a couple really awesome moments, but the rest of the setting is hot garbage and you have to do a whole lot of gymnastics to make it work. Example: MC is usually Bella's brother, but he doesn't murder her so you gotta rewrite her a bit, or make it so he doesn't care about her all that much. Then comes Cedric Diggory, you gotta justify not murdering him as soon as possible. After that you need to figure out what to do now that you've written those super nice romantic moments with FL (Rosalie in good fics, Alice in bad fics, Esme in crack fics.) so you end up dropping it or not publishing it at all. (my case)
Adramelech:8/10 likelihood of being dropped for no reason even when they are really good and with no warning