Scarface3699

ngl you probably shouldn't include a stat point system if your going to remove the entire point of it. Quite literally at that. But I guess that's what happens if you copy a power system with minimal thought to adapting it to the world your dropping someone in.

wasn't kuzan his student at this time??

this exact same style of dialog in every exchange is so tiring. Please please please write people speaking to one another as more than finishing each other's sentences and doing one word responses followed by life is flow and the character saying that's poetic.

why did u use an ai slop image for one of the most popular characters ever created? there's so many pictures of Peter in different versions and art styles to pick from. Hell even fanart would've been cool

I just hope stuff like this is avoided in future. You seem stuck in a poc and ignore the world around the character

the doing sword forms with his arms thing was stupid to imagine a 1 yr old doing. And u put in mannerisms that a grown person would do like touch their face in confusion that I have to ignore and I have to assume everyone watching this damn ceremony is somehow blind to or it looks extremely weird and suspicious for your 1yr to act like an adult.

slice of life stuff is too much. Get to something interesting like what are we doing reading about a gojo/sukuna fusion getting damn allergy meds. This character has done nothing interesting since biscuit left

lol that's so trash

no unique one piece laugh...sad

...whats the point of ur story thenif he's just this invulnerable this young. Kaido, big mom and king aren't even this stupidly durable