SuohDaoist

not really a dark lord, he's about to become a good guy or at least not as bad as Voldemort, and his soul mate is annoyiong. she keeps forcing herself onto him and tryna talk or hang out with him, very annoying and forced. He shouldn't even be someone's mate, ruined the story now

unlikely. political marriages are expected but this particular one is unlikely and just the fanfic author being creative tbf

everything was going well, a smarter Naruto, characters are less annoying and seem to be smarter, not very cartoony or cliche, Then the author introduced the 9tails as a chick 😑 Gender bender.

So the mc has all this amazing build up and before his reincarnation, almost seems like he's gonna be his own independent character who does whatever he wants but then "God" gives him a message to make harry strong lol. Yep. the mc is jerki ngoff harry 👍

this dragging too much. slow pacing is fine but knowing when to quicken the pacing and slowing it is key, some parts would have been better not dragged on

the funniest thing is how everyone acts like the Targaryens were just born kings and therefore should stay or return to the throne after they lost it, in reality they used force to become king, others can do the same and have just as much right to the throne lol

Lol we don't even have to look at the anime, just look at the manga.... The anime helped Hinata more by giving her more scenes and a presence ..... Hinata pairing makes no sense in both Manga and anime lol Sakura had more screen time sure, but almost all her screen time was comic relief , hitting Naruto and getting beat up or losing and doing nothing most the time aka the anime used Sakura as comic relief and made viewers see her as useless..... lmao If you read the manga only, you'll see that Naruto and Hinata was very forced, from the war arc to the movie, where even in the movie they had to retcon Naruto even liking Sakura, the animated movies told viewers that Naruto only loves Sakura cause he was chasing Sasuke ....🤨😂😂 For a studio who ships Sakura they sure made Sakura do so much extra stuff that everyone hated her more and more.....👍

IRAS still holds up. Wish fulfilment yes face slapping yes but what set it apart was how alive the world actually felt, how much emotion the author actually managed to generate despite it being cliche af. The execution of comedy really helps smooth things over and then the use of Chinese literature or arts was a very smart move, because most western readers don't know those classics, we're introduced to a whole new world of classic literature and arts, Also it helps the story flow better, there's a lot of novels that do the same blueprint but they always use extremely popular movies or songs and because we already know what it's about we don't actually invest as much in the film or song the mc is "inspired" by.

another dumb thing about pain is that he talks about ending hatred and bringing peace, so instead of killing the well know evil and greedy ninjas and kages who do nothing but want more wars etc, he kills jiraiya whos's in pursuit of peace and always defends the little guys or the bullied. He could have cleaned the world of guys like danzo, orochimaru, tshuchikage, raikage, Gato, zabuza, black market organization etc etc, yet instead he lets them continue acting out lol

another forced Hinata pairing 🤦‍♂️ save yourselves guys, don't support these idiots's