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This story is peak rn I need more

Any chance you start to improve Dustin more When he first became Dustin he was all for working out/ getting in shape and coming up with plans for the future so beating demogorgons/future villains isn't just trying to win on luck. It just feels like he isn't preparing for the future as much as he should. Still a great read

Another great story If you take donations id love to donate to keep this story going

This is definitely one of my favorite fanfics but it feels like the story is dragging a lil bit Still love the story tho keep it up🫵🏾

This story is great love to see Barry living to his full potential I would love for their to be longer chapters

I love this story I hope it continues to the NFL I like that we get to see a real bond between the brothers adds depth to their relationship I also like the idea of the 4 of them sticking together in college I can’t wait to see who they all play for

This story is great I don’t understand the hate for it honestly. Slow paced and it’s not just wish fulfillment. The MC actually had emotions and has to deal with them like a real person. GREAT STORY SO FAR KEEP IT UP [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]

Great story loving the concept Seeing him grow as a player is awesome The addition of new youth players/rivals in the chat killed it for me tho

I love the character background and how skilled he is But the character sometimes don’t play to their real show counterpart. There’s no way Bradford or Grey would want to here about his backstory this much. Also I think the main characters backstory should be talked about less there’s like 5 chapters back to back where all they talk about is his old missions. Get more into the story about being a cop and how he’s changing from his old tactics. Still a good read so far tho