GodOfLight

Raw ? .

Cringe , Can't you make it smarter and less idiotic? Where is his knowledge about the future and his old memories that should make him more mature and smarter?

The same impulsive and emotional fool and idiot like Ace, I don’t see any reason for his reincarnation at all, because he’s just another Ace who will consider Luffy and the others his family and brothers for whom he would be willing to die, cringe

I would like to say that although your main character is not complete trash and an idiot, but he is close to it, I also do not understand his attachment to Wanda and the Ancient One, although I consider them not important, because there are thousands of them and they are not unique, I could understand him if they existed only in one copy, he disgusts me because he is too stupid, an emotional idiot, naive and tearful snotter

The translator did a very good job and the translation is more or less good, also at the beginning the story was very good, but gradually it turned into complete garbage with forced comedy, the idiocy of the main character for the sake of the plot, where he loses to the naked female version of Naruto only for the sake of forced comedy and nothing more more emphasizing his idiocy and proving that he is a submissive

Trash , absolute trash , nah , i have hate this chapter , and now this fic too , 1 star

I liked the fic, but I don't like the fact that it misses so many opportunities and makes the wrong distribution of characteristics when it could first train and only then add

Can you do it faster? When will the time skip be? The main character is annoying with his stupidity and slowness, why didn’t he kill Vali? why didn't he use it as a source of energy for growth World Tree, why does it miss so many opportunities? and when will he start changing the plot?

It's okay and too predictable, usual from this author at early chapter the story is somewhat good but quite later gone downhill. maybe it's too early, but for me beside from mc power that slightly interesting, other thing feel like cookies cutter orphan mc who have hidden power seek revenge for his family death.

I agree, go and kill yourself for this shit