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If you are in the comments trying to decide whether to read this story, here is my honest opinion: beginning to read I found a synopsis original that urges me to want to know more, without doubts. I really like the FL. The characterizations of the characters are concrete and well related. The descriptions of the surroundings and the situation are accurate. The plot is clear in the synopsis and the chapters do not skimp on the story. There is definitely an inspired author here with a great story to tell ... Continue like this author! I am a new reader of this story.[img=recommend]
Hi author, upon reading your book I noticed some errors but I do not want to go further noticing all your mistakes. But the plot seemed nice and engaging readers to read more, your characters seemed well described especially their history or background, overall it's nice to read since the paragraph breaks makes it easy to read.
Romance is not my cup of tea, but I always give an honest review. Your story is really good and captivating. You know how to get a reader hooked onto the story. Your character descriptions are really good too. I like your writing style, although you have a few grammar mistakes. And one thing to remember, because I used to make this mistake a lot. Capitalize your frist word in dialogue unless the dialogue goes on in a sentence. Examples: He looked around, confused at where he was at, and spoke out, “Hello, is anyone here?” “Your eyes are,” the man observed, finding the right words to say, “are captivating.” Other than that you are doing a good job!
This book is a nice one. I am quite picky on books that I read but this has caught my interest. i just hope it will continue to do so as it develops. I love how the FL's character is uncovering but I am impatient to read how she will be connected to the ML. there are so many mysteries surrounding it that makes me wonder what would be unraveled first. Good luck author and keep up with the good story. I'll keep on reading. please make regular updates.
The story has an interesting premise and it kept my attention. The story development is quite good, I like where it's going and wouldn't mind reading more. The things I have to say to the author: -Story development and world background are solid -Character design is good, but Carla seems too flat to me, although her actions don't show that, try to flesh her out better. We do see her aspirations and some of personality, but it's not conveyed in the best way -Writing quality: Please get an editor. You have grammatical mistakes, punctuation is problematic, misspelled words. English may not be your native language, but do try to make your writing better. Use grammarly and some other sites that will show you how it should be done. That's all from me. I liked the story and I DO think it's interesting and that it has lots of potential, but you can do even better. Fight on!