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Reviews of Moonlight Kiss

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Moonlight Kiss

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Mar_Urbano
Mar_UrbanoLv4Mar_Urbano

If you are in the comments trying to decide whether to read this story, here is my honest opinion: beginning to read I found a synopsis original that urges me to want to know more, without doubts. I really like the FL. The characterizations of the characters are concrete and well related. The descriptions of the surroundings and the situation are accurate. The plot is clear in the synopsis and the chapters do not skimp on the story. There is definitely an inspired author here with a great story to tell ... Continue like this author! I am a new reader of this story.[img=recommend]

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Glenstonx
GlenstonxLv2Glenstonx

Hi author, upon reading your book I noticed some errors but I do not want to go further noticing all your mistakes. But the plot seemed nice and engaging readers to read more, your characters seemed well described especially their history or background, overall it's nice to read since the paragraph breaks makes it easy to read.

RJMidnight
RJMidnightLv3RJMidnight

Romance is not my cup of tea, but I always give an honest review. Your story is really good and captivating. You know how to get a reader hooked onto the story. Your character descriptions are really good too. I like your writing style, although you have a few grammar mistakes. And one thing to remember, because I used to make this mistake a lot. Capitalize your frist word in dialogue unless the dialogue goes on in a sentence. Examples: He looked around, confused at where he was at, and spoke out, “Hello, is anyone here?” “Your eyes are,” the man observed, finding the right words to say, “are captivating.” Other than that you are doing a good job!

realmarniemoo
realmarniemooLv1realmarniemoo

Whoa! this is a great one. I am not done with all the chapters yet and I am not a fan of werewolves type of books, but this one caught me! so so good!

MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeeeLv3MichelleLeeee

The tension when reading in this novel is well done by the author. There are tense mistakes that are easily fixed. Overall, if you are into good characters and a mystery, this one is for you!

Gery_
Gery_Lv14Gery_

Perfectly demonstrated character and world development. Readers can hook up on the book in no time so I can recommend this great story to anyone who likes new stuff.

Killerpants
KillerpantsLv2Killerpants

I already read half the book and I really find it addicting and.intruguing at the same time. The story is really great at the start and it only gets better as time goes on. Continue the hard work author!

Vis7777
Vis7777Lv1Vis7777

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Shionokami
ShionokamiLv1Shionokami

Alright then this is the kind of story that i wasn't expecting to caught me, and yet it did, wasn't really expecting to be immersed in it. Whatever your doing keep it up you have something special here and i can't wait to see what happens next!

Dippi
DippiLv12Dippi

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Rea_Palayao
Rea_PalayaoLv12Rea_Palayao

This book is a nice one. I am quite picky on books that I read but this has caught my interest. i just hope it will continue to do so as it develops. I love how the FL's character is uncovering but I am impatient to read how she will be connected to the ML. there are so many mysteries surrounding it that makes me wonder what would be unraveled first. Good luck author and keep up with the good story. I'll keep on reading. please make regular updates.

Omo_Comforts
Omo_ComfortsLv3Omo_Comforts

Hey author, the plot is really nice. I love the way you describe everything. It is very interesting. I love it a lot

LyingCrowPromises
LyingCrowPromisesLv10LyingCrowPromises

The story has an interesting premise and it kept my attention. The story development is quite good, I like where it's going and wouldn't mind reading more. The things I have to say to the author: -Story development and world background are solid -Character design is good, but Carla seems too flat to me, although her actions don't show that, try to flesh her out better. We do see her aspirations and some of personality, but it's not conveyed in the best way -Writing quality: Please get an editor. You have grammatical mistakes, punctuation is problematic, misspelled words. English may not be your native language, but do try to make your writing better. Use grammarly and some other sites that will show you how it should be done. That's all from me. I liked the story and I DO think it's interesting and that it has lots of potential, but you can do even better. Fight on!

DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiLv12DaisukiDayoSenpai

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Immortal_eve4
Immortal_eve4Lv2Immortal_eve4

This book is great. The fl is strong-willed and I love it. The grammar is good as well as the writing style and it's so easy to read. Can't wait to read more chapters soon.

miyukii
miyukiiLv3miyukii

the plot is good, storyline is making me addictive, I love the way characters are showcased and honestly it is quite a refreshing experience.eagerly waiting for new chapters, good job and keep up!

Pravalika_Kuppam_0380
Pravalika_Kuppam_0380Lv13Pravalika_Kuppam_0380

The story is so good.. Characters are well designed.. Only problem is Author stopped writing.. I hope you will take some time and continue writing

Crystal_M_Jackson
Crystal_M_JacksonLv11Crystal_M_Jackson

This story is outstanding. The characters to the plot. wonderfully written. Where are the remaining chapters???? Please [img=recommend] You are an exceptional storyteller. keep up the good work.

Gery_
Gery_Lv14Gery_

Amazing plot, characters and design. I really like it so keep up the good work, cause I can only say it has great potential!!!! I love it!!!