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Immortal_eve4

Immortal_eve4

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Just someone lost in the world

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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve44mth
    Replied to endless_imaginer

    I'm sorry for the late upload.

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    His War-Freak Wife
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Replied to GRITTY_HUE

    Hahaha thank you

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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
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    I love female leads that are badasses and this is one of them. The story is very interesting and funny at the same time. There may be a few grammar mistakes but overall this is amazing. Good job writing this story :)

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    THE SECRET OF THE BEAUTY IN BLACK
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Replied to Daoist350266

    Me too but she clarified it on the AN

    Ch 2 IN A SECLUDED PLACE
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Posted

    This is very good that I just can't stop myself from reading it. I like Tianshi as an fl and the flow of the story is just great. There may be a few mistakes but it doesn't affect the story as a whole. Please update soon :)

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    Reincarnation From Villainess to Princess: Journey to Being Empress
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    No, you're not selfish if you think like that

    Ch 12 Crowning Glory
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    A Love Triangle ples.

    Ch 10 Your Bride
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    I'm sensing a love triangle or is it just me? and also you misspelled museum in the first chapters. Just pointing it out. :)

    Ch 8 General Qui
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    She's so persistent on killing herself haha.

    Ch 7 That Sounds Like A Plan
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    The prince is so bold huehuehue.

    Ch 6 End All This Nightmare
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    Why did I laugh when she tried to kill herself? Oh, and your usage of first point of view is so good. I like how she thinks so much

    Ch 5 This Should Do The Trick
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    This was both so funny and good. :)

    Ch 4 You Were A Good Dream
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Replied to Immortal_eve4

    Oh and I think that the question mark is unnecessary.

    Ch 3 Am I In Hell?
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    Hello, so I noticed that your first paragraph was choppy and had so many commas. But overall your first chapter is great :)

    Ch 3 Am I In Hell?
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Replied to winterdaisy55

    Ooh, thank you for replying.

    Ch 1 Escape
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Posted

    The plot is very intriguing and the story is good but it needs some polishing. You did a great job with your character descriptions with Luke abd Violet. Keep up the great job and I can't wait to read more chapters :)

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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    The plotline is very interesting.

    Ch 2 Mate
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Commented

    This is a good start but can you tell me what era this is? And please put indications for flashbacks.

    Ch 1 Escape
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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Replied to Ummmname

    Thank you very much

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  • Immortal_eve4
    Immortal_eve45mth
    Posted

    This book is great. I love how you describe the Mc to make it more relatable and realistic. The descriptions were amazing and I could really picture out the scenes. There may be few mistakes in grammar but it doesn't affect the book as whole. Great job!

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