This got me hooked! I'm going to read the rest of the chapters after I leave this review ahaha Simple but sweet character introduction and overall progress of the story. MC is very likable prolly because we have the same personality ehehe. Just watch out for your tense usage since you tend to jump from present to past in two sentences. What you can do is apply everything to past/ past perfect tense and just apply present tense on the dialogues so your readers won't get confused in the time-frame. Overall, very fun story. Keep it up, dear author ^ ^
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LIKEdeepu_:Sure dear.. I have to edit the chapters again.. So I will keep in mind while doing.. Thank you so much for the detailed review
DaisukiDayoSenpai:don't overwork yourself! That said, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story ^o^