Review Detail of Vis7777 in Moonlight Kiss

Very good start. I liked Carla very much. Her relationship with the wolf was also cute. Sassy is good as the villain and I really didn't like her. The only issue I had with this story is that everything is only 1 line long. After reading it for a while it kinda hurts the eyes so just change that and it will read better. Carla having red eyes is nice but I wish we could get a little bit more of a description of how she looks. It works very well as a short read between classes, when there's a break at work, or you're on a commute. Also, good work!