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thank you for taking your time and reading my story! Thanks for your review, I appreciate it very much!!

thank you for taking your time and reading my story! Thanks for your review, I appreciate it very much.. Im working on my english!

thank you for taking your time and reading my story! Thanks for your review, I appreciate it very much

thank you for taking your time to read my story! Thanks for your review, I appreciate it very much

thank you for taking your time and reading my story! Thanks for your review, I appreciate it very much

I had not found a story like this for a long time. -Entertaining -Well defined characters, also entertaining and engaging -Concrete descriptions, do not goes around too much and exposes the context of the situations precisely ............. I decided to take a look at this story and when I realized it I had not stopped reading for the whole day! .......... The protagonist is out of the ordinary: it is a conjunction of character and conflicts ... I was involved by the spontaneity of Ms. Shetelton's reactions (I dont know how to write the names), but seeing her with her husband I suddenly wanted to hit them .... And Ezra ... Well, I think I'm going to dream whit his smiles from thinking so much that there's something about him that I haven't discovered yet ... .......... I needed to express my admiration for the author for a light and engaging narrative, entertaining and with a strong undertone !

I love Ms. Sutherton already

I love these kinds of introductions ! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

It is a hidden gem! It's just starting but the narrative is clear and easy to read. The plot is raised from the beginning with a prologue that ends with a shocking paragraph that lets me glimpse what the essence of the protagonist will be. Well defined characters A clear and argued plot Good development of situations And the suspense It have everything you need for a great story ... I'm speechless, keep up your good work Author

wow! very good start, it left me speechless

Okay, where do I start with my review ... Why do I keep insisting on reading storys of this genre? My God, the synopsis did not prepare me for what was inside this story. It's painful to read about Jonah from the beginning and I can't believe you're not English speaking because the way this story unfolds is definitely the result of an excellent grammar. I avoid this genre because I am so easy to impress, but the descriptions really are to applaud. I think it will be difficult for me to detach myself from the feeling of being in the middle of a cemetery. Author, let me breathe! I think I can only list what surprised me the most about this story: - Excellent narrative. - Excellent characterizations of the characters -Amazing descriptions of the context and situations. -Incredible ability to transmit myself as a reader, each sensation of Jonah and the context This story definitely deserves full marks.. I need to give the author my five stars!!

Author please update soon! I love the synopsis of this story and I was a bit saddened that a story so well told, with a good characterization of characters and good descriptions, with literary quality and a genre that I like so much, is updated so slowly

If you are in the comments trying to decide whether to read this story, here is my honest opinion: beginning to read I found a synopsis original that urges me to want to know more, without doubts. I really like the FL. The characterizations of the characters are concrete and well related. The descriptions of the surroundings and the situation are accurate. The plot is clear in the synopsis and the chapters do not skimp on the story. There is definitely an inspired author here with a great story to tell ... Continue like this author! I am a new reader of this story.[img=recommend]

This is the first horror story I read and the first paragraph was enough to tell me what I was going to find ... I must admit I underestimated the hashtags. The characters are concrete and the descriptions allow you to really create the image of each situation (they forced me to see every moment) My God, I thought I could venture into the genre but the author does not let me breathe, she started with everything! If you like the genre indicated, I'm sure this story will meet your expectations! Clear characters Excellent descriptions (too much) Specific events and whit only six chapters at this moment, I could say that it is an explosive beginning

I was looking for something to read... and when I start to read this story I was like "woooww" ... I love it, I'm reading this and I'm in the 10th chapter, but I need to make justice for this story and I need to tell this is incredibly so well written! The descriptions of the place, situation and character are so well done that it could show me the entire world from that aldea... You have a gift author, don't stop to writte cause your way to expres is wonderful ... I will continue reading!

My favorite word... "Magic"

Good for you! Im Spanish teacher and I cant make my students read two novels per year... 😑 it's a hard job