Review Detail of RJMidnight in Moonlight Kiss

Romance is not my cup of tea, but I always give an honest review. Your story is really good and captivating. You know how to get a reader hooked onto the story. Your character descriptions are really good too. I like your writing style, although you have a few grammar mistakes. And one thing to remember, because I used to make this mistake a lot. Capitalize your frist word in dialogue unless the dialogue goes on in a sentence. Examples: He looked around, confused at where he was at, and spoke out, “Hello, is anyone here?” “Your eyes are,” the man observed, finding the right words to say, “are captivating.” Other than that you are doing a good job!