Reviews of Man Made Demon

Well-written. I am not the type to read books with "system" themes but this one had me hooked. The plot was not giving everything too much, just enough element for suspense and excitement. Plus, the writing quality is very decent and readable. You are on the right track. Keep it up!

Other than a few puntuation/grammar errors, I can see a good plot being laid out here. For me, I wouldn’t mind reading fantasy novels like this any day, so keep up the good work author ! (⌒▽⌒)

A well put story to be honest. Loved how you bought feeling into this character Jay. Might I add here, you can make your story much better by just a few changes. For instance you have used your mc Jay's name a lot, try using he/she for ur upcoming characters as well. Otherwise well written ♥️

A promising revenge story. fantasy factors are good and I really enjoy reading so far. But there are some bad points: -I would like to read more detailed about the things that happening around and places he is in. -Characters other than mc are just there, no personality or anything special. we need to at least know somethigs about the ones that he wants to get revenge. Story is new and dont have lot of chapters. I'm sure this problems will be solved. my english is not so good I can't say much for grammar but I don't think its bad.

An overall good story that suffers from some grammar errors, mostly punctuations. The characters, Jay in particular, is written well; you can feel his misery and anger shimmering underneath, waiting to just erupt. Story development however is a bit cliched, what with the ring and a system being there. I do like that there's also some really interesting backstory going on with the MC. How his mother disappeared (is she in another world too? 🤔), the moment where he comes to peace with the hallucination of his father (that convo in the latest chapter was good), and the dark thoughts that constantly passes through his mind; it's all very human. That said, the story hasn't developed enough for me to accurately say how good it is, but I'm confident that the author is going to do it well. One thing that bothered me though is the system. Honestly, I felt like the author could've removed the system entirely, it's way too cliched (hear me out). Just imagine: how different would it feel if he was just thrust into the new world without any guide. Then, a voice starts whispering in his head, telling him the things the system said in the novel (like how to kill those snake leeches or how strong those inhabitants were). It would be a lot more interesting as then you'd have the MC constantly asking himself, "Who's talking? Am I going crazy? Schizophrenic? Do I have another personality? Or is this the ring talking? How do I, or it, know all of this? Why am I getting stronger the more I kill? Is it just the satisfaction I feel, or is the ring making me stronger?". That would've brought a more mysterious aspect to the story as opposed to the trope, "Oh, there's a system, Google Sensei!". Sorry, it's just that there's way too many of those and they're soo game like and unrealistic. And tiring. Anyways, that's me ranting, ignore it. The story is good and give it a read. Me, I'll be waiting for more chapters before I binge read.

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This was disappointing. In light of the writing quality, I thought the story would also be up to par, however, the reality is different. The story is very fast-paced which along with the lack of worldbuilding makes the experience rather lacklustre. The characters are also very random with extreme polarity, aka bad guys are bad because they are bad and the good guys follow the same logic. The MC is also an edge lord. Sure, he went through a lot of shit, but it is nowhere as horrifying as he makes it out to be. My advice to the author would be to slow down, actually make me give a damn about the characters and start describing the MC's path more thoroughly.

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So far so good! Please carry on writing! I can't wait to read more! 100% recommend

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So far so good! I definitely recommend reading it! Carry on please!

Great start for a story :D More powers, this is gonna be a long ride. Hoping you could also drop a review for my new novel—Isekai Institute. Thanks!

An amazing novel. The text block is smooth and easy to read. The content of the novel is fascinating, interesting to read, and there is intrigue. There are small rough edges with commas and periods. But this is not reflected in the text block in any way. I like it. This is a fascinating novel, you read it easily and after reading it, you will have pleasant impressions. Thanks to the author for writing such an interesting story. That's a great 14 chapters and almost 14,000 reads. This already suggests that the novel is readable.

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The story is well written and so far, there's been a fair bit of mystery and action. I'm really enjoying what's in the world and how our protagonist interacts with it.

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