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[ Class: Rogue ]- NikTitanik8662dCommentedCh 70 [ New Class Obtained! ]
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Jester
[ Congratulations! Through Your Persistent Tricks, Uncanny Methods Of Staying Barely One Step Ahead of Danger And Unorthodox Combat Style...You Have Obtained A New Class! ] - NikTitanik8662dCommented
a wise one I see
He wasn't falling for any traps. - NikTitanik8662dPosted
It starts a bit awkward but with potential which starts to slowly dissolve as time goes on. The MC starts doing things that are in complete contrast with his character. He doesn't know whether he is cold or compassionate and there isn't any rule to this like compassionate only to close friends or something. Also, the amount of young masters is ridiculous for a supposedly "serious" work. Another thing this suffers from is convenience syndrome, aka, whatever the MC needs he will get a few chapters later without any real reason. Basically, shut off your brain and prepare your wallet.
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I'm starting to see a very "accidental" plot progression here...
\ * \ * After reaching Lv 04, the user's body has adapted better to the flame and control over it has become even more natural, having absorbed a lot of divine energy from a god of light with great healing abilities, the flame absorbed part of these skills and integrated them into itself, now allowing the user to heal using their own flames in exchange for mana. \ * \ *) - NikTitanik8663dCommented
um yeah, you are kinda late now that you have literally named yourself Lucifer on a goddamn interstellar social-game platform you knobhead
'Blessings of light are usually given to people who wish to have healing abilities. It is very rare to see one Blessed with a Light Blessing focused on attack, which greatly limits the scope of gods who may have Blessed him. At the moment it will be difficult to discover who this god is, not to mention that he will probably tell me himself after the battle. But there is only one god that I hope he is not blessed by: the Catholic God. After all, it could be problematic to deal with them. I also hope that no one knows that I am the Descendant of Lucifer,' Noah thought before he saw the man preparing to attack again. - NikTitanik8664dCommentedCh 167 Declaration of War
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NUGGETS!!! [heavy breathing ensues]
"Do you guys want any?" Ray asked, his hand out with the plate of microwaved chicken nuggets. - NikTitanik8664dCommented
no need to add the "good at body language", it has been force-fed to us already during the dwarf mission
A little lost without knowing what to do, Noah just nodded his head positively and the man, who before looked so serious and threatening, now got a little excited. This was not noticeable to ordinary people, but for Noah, who could read his body language, it was not difficult at all to see, which surprised Noah even more. - NikTitanik8664dPosted
I'll go from writing to the actual contents of the novel. Grammar is fairly decent, however, it seems that having Goblins speak in broken sentences has rubbed off of the Author. As such, sentences with either missing words or simply wrong ones occur sporadically. Now onto the novel itself. The premise is fairly interesting. The problem occurs when the Author goes back into the past and then backtracks into the present as it can be quite confusing at times. The characters are very alive unlike in most novels, the only problem I have with them is that they are a bit too forgiving sometimes. It's a decent read.
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what about blinking?
As soon as Alex explained it all out to him, he struggled to keep his poker face as his eyes almost popped out of their socket from the sudden realization that hit him like a truck. They had previously learned about morse code and the meaning of SOS back in school. However, he never knew that they could be applied in such a way and that Ray could be resourceful enough to use them in his current situation. - NikTitanik8665dCommented
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hmm
Natasha grabbed Rock's arm, "Rock, don't touch yourself! That's a sin." She said in a serious voice.
