Review Detail of Lullabybao in Man Made Demon

Item: Man Made Demon
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

LullabybaoLv33yrLullabybao

A well put story to be honest. Loved how you bought feeling into this character Jay. Might I add here, you can make your story much better by just a few changes. For instance you have used your mc Jay's name a lot, try using he/she for ur upcoming characters as well. Otherwise well written ♥️

Man Made Demon

Jay_Synergy

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Jay_SynergyAuthorJay_Synergy

Thank you for your suggestion. I agree with your point and have also noticed my excessive use of the MC's name. I definitely plan to change this habit in the future. Thank You.

3yr

LullabybaoLv3Lullabybao

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Jay_Synergy:Thank you for your suggestion. I agree with your point and have also noticed my excessive use of the MC's name. I definitely plan to change this habit in the future. Thank You.

3yr