Review Detail of NovelBorn in Man Made Demon

A promising revenge story. fantasy factors are good and I really enjoy reading so far. But there are some bad points: -I would like to read more detailed about the things that happening around and places he is in. -Characters other than mc are just there, no personality or anything special. we need to at least know somethigs about the ones that he wants to get revenge. Story is new and dont have lot of chapters. I'm sure this problems will be solved. my english is not so good I can't say much for grammar but I don't think its bad.